Journeyman

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 8 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

You are lost in the depths of the earth and must find your way out; whether to save the world, rule an empire, live in peace, or succumb to a perilous end, that is up to you.

 

Granted, it may be a little random, but hopefully, you like it.  Please leave comments so that I can improve upon it as this is my first story game published on this site.

Player Comments

Hmm. Well, this was very interesting. I didn’t look to find each of every ending, but the way it was written is certainly above the level of first time writer. The first few pages were a bit blank but you did include good vocabulary to describe some surroundings and people. Though there is not much plot, it changed a simple clickthrough-style game into one of mild intrigue. There is still a lot of improvement to be made, but I am very impressed!

It is very bold of you to have your first game as an Advanced Storygame. Knowing how much time it takes to fully grasp the entire system, I can certainly say that you have a lot of potential. Keep writing!
-- At_Your_Throat on 3/16/2019 11:48:31 PM with a score of 0
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