Kick Dora's Butt!
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"trek through the forest"
"Make sure not to blink"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
This is the game we have been waiting to make for years! Finally, we get to kick that little butthead's butt!
Perhaps I'm a little too old, but I don't personally understand the Dora hate. Is she really that annoying? Now, if you made a game where you got to brutally torture and murder Scrappy-Doo in a variety of creative ways, THAT would be a premise I could get behind!
As for the game itself, well... It wasn't completely God awful. (Don't get me wrong, it was God awful, it just wasn't completely God awful.) On the plus side... Well... It had pictures and items, so well done for that, I guess.
The biggest flaw for me (other than the fact that there's no plot, story, characters, or pretty much anything that makes a game worth playing) is that I'm guessing that this game was supposed to be funny... And it wasn't. I saw literally nothing funny in it. I mean even those God awful "OMG! Totes so random!" games that we all hate so much at least make an attempt at humour, but yours didn't even have that. Considering this is meant to be a joke game (presumably), I don't think I counted a single joke at all.
I think the one and only "joke" in this game is, "You're trying to kill Dora the Explorer. It's funny because you hate her." Which completely went over my head, since I never watched Dora. Maybe if I'd watched the show and knew what it is about Dora that apparently makes everybody who saw it as a kid want to murder her, I might've appreciated the game a bit more. As it is... I guess I'm glad you got to live out your fantasy. ^_^
on 5/31/2019 1:14:23 PM with a score of 0
Hmm... I think I may have overrated this the first time I played this.
Looking back on it, I think I rated this more because I found it funny rather then quality writing. The storygame I still find funny, but now I find it to be a lot less quality then before.
I do hate Dora, and I still love the fact that you made a storygame centered around it. Although some of the situations seemed rather illogical, such as a fat little scumball with no muscle who's about ten years old somehow managing to throw me off the train and under train tracks as I try to carve her face off with a knife.
The ending made no sense honestly. Not to me at least :P
It was very short, and only took me about two minutes to complete. I think more detail would be great for this storygame because it seemed very linear and poorly thrown together.
And like Sent said, the name calling made this storygame rather amusing xD
I feel like you used humor as a replacement for well developed characters, and remember, character development is always crucial. I understand Dora is an evil bitch, but nothing beyond that. I know I hate Dora, and nothing more.
on 3/19/2017 8:31:48 PM with a score of 0
I mean, there was good grammar and stuff like that but: why are we killing Dora?
Honestly, in my opinion, Dora's a rad little girl. Does the author just hate her? Did they want to be funny by killing her? I read the description and I conclude that you guys just dislike her.
Even for fanfiction, this wasn't that impressive. Our main goal was to kill Dora. But that's it. And if we didn't, we would explode because of her. There should've been more to this story to make it interesting. Maybe we could become friends with her! That would be more interesting than just trying to kill her.
on 11/20/2020 6:29:49 PM with a score of 0
This was a very VERY bad storygame, even for fanfiction.
on 3/27/2020 1:28:09 PM with a score of 0
XD wow this is funny as heck XD i really like this, please make more games......(please??).
-- leslie on 2/5/2020 6:40:20 PM with a score of 0
This story had unimpressive writing, it had no real plot, and it didn’t really have a whole lot of branching.
The grammar was more decent than that of some stories, but that and the novelty of killing Dora was not enough to make this a good story. A torn scrap of quality paper is still just a piece of garbage even if it's nice and smooth to touch.
There was nothing to this. 2005 was a dark time.
I liked the mountain picture on the first page.
on 1/21/2020 1:35:09 PM with a score of 0
The story was okay. I get that it was supposed to be a humour story, and the premise was fun. I found that most pages had either a 'good' or a 'wrong' choice, with the good choices continuing the (relatively short) story, and he bad choices leading to a game over. Sometimes the bad ends were obvious, but other times they seemed to be random.
on 1/15/2020 2:22:45 AM with a score of 0
-- YOLANDA on 10/4/2019 1:15:28 PM with a score of 0
This is the best one ever
-- Nigger on 6/6/2019 8:14:31 PM with a score of 0
eggpants are good for your body
-- hhfjgo;hihiw on 4/22/2019 10:36:23 AM with a score of 0
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