Kitties first day out

Player Rating2.32/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 15 ratings since
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Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

Tags

You are a 4 week old kitten venturing outside of the protection of your mothers pet bed.

Player Comments

This really needs to be proofread.
-- RealKuriosIasoun on 10/28/2019 3:02:47 PM with a score of 0
This is a cute little tale of a kitten adventuring around the house. There isn't really a plot; it is more a slice of life. Everything is from the kitten's perspective, which can be fun for the reader that knows what is going on when the kitten does not.

Oddly, one gets inventory items at the end of the story, which doesn't make a lot of sense.

Though it is a very short game, there are a handful of different endings. It would be nice to see this developed into a larger adventure with more rooms in the house, where the kitten can actually use her acquired skills.

The title could use capitalized and should be a possessive, not a plural, but overall the game is written well.
-- Camelon on 10/24/2019 6:24:54 PM with a score of 0
You should go back and proofread this, or at least capitalize the title. But overall it was kinda cute I guess, but I would suggest making it a little longer if you want it to be actually enjoyable and develop a story.
-- StupidManatee on 10/20/2019 10:01:49 PM with a score of 0
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