Player Rating5.61/8

"#83 overall, #6 for 2008"
based on 705 ratings since 07/24/2008
played 25,639 times (finished 871)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length5/8

"Not going to lose any sleep"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

Underneath the sickness there's love...

Additional Notes:


This story contains a lot of graphic content, if you are offended by ultra violence, explicit sexual descriptions, tons of swearing, blasphemy, inappropriate dark humor, and brutal misanthropy in general then DO NOT read this story!

Of course now that I’ve mentioned all the things it contains, you’ll probably read it anyway, you sick little monkey.

Well don’t complain if you get offended, I did warn you and keep in mind it IS only a story.

This also isn't really a "win/lose" type story. While there are some endings better than others, this is basically just a tale about a very twisted man and his very twisted lifestyle.

Player Comments

Why were all the edgelord stories so bad when the kids have had this one here for YEARS to model their writing and day to day lives after?

Anyway I'm torn between this and the Very Special CYS as the link to use to introduce someone to the site with...
-- mizal on 3/19/2017 1:34:37 PM
Dissatisfied with the first three endings I got, I actually played this like 10 times already... :P

Awesome story! Love Sick is an apt title, I will give you that. This really helps me learn how graphic I can go with my own stories. Lol.

It was too short for my taste, but I really enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. I will definitely come back here sometime, just to see if there are any more endings...
-- breezy134 on 3/15/2016 1:04:26 AM
Oh, EndMaster... Every time I finish one of your stories I don't know weather to run screaming or give you my number.

Nice job.
-- Starky on 4/17/2015 6:00:28 AM
Spoiler Alert:
I know you warned me, but the incest thing was a bit much.
-- Quorrah on 9/1/2018 4:46:13 PM
-- MeggyMegz007 on 7/2/2018 1:38:25 AM
I understand that this story is ten years old, so my thoughts about this may be a bit out-of-place, but here goes.

I love gory stuff. It's interesting to me, it creates a thrill that I enjoy in horror, as opposed to jumpscares. However, I couldn't really get behind this story. I told myself, "Alright, you read the warnings, this is going to hit you like a ton of bricks, seeing as you generally are easily offended." Interestingly enough, doing that allowed me to completely get over the offensive humor. That wasn't the thing that made me feel as "eh" as I did about this story. It was... all too MUCH. Not the humor, not the brash and ridiculous choices.

The gore. I was let down by the gore. I love a good gory scene, but... past the vocal chords part, it all just seemed too "I had five dollars of budget money to produce this horror movie so I just made it a slasher film with no development." The whole shindig with the vocal chords getting cut out? Pretty well written. That's a horror thing that always gets me, vocal chords. But an unborn fetus getting splattered around the room? From a ton of gunshots? I just imagined this as a sort of water balloon full of red food coloring that burst, and it just caused me to narrow my eyes and click onto the next option. The guy who walks in with multiple broken bones is an interesting concept, but really thrown in there.

I'm probably making this much more detailed of an analysis than you were ever hoping for, for this specific story, but... I felt like leaving the feedback. I still plan on reading your other works, and I do thoroughly appreciate your comments and posts around the site. Sorry if this seems like Too Much™ of a review!
-- scoople on 6/22/2018 10:47:58 PM
This was very scary. it was a good story, i like how the guy is doing experiments and is completely crazy!
-- thanos'sson on 4/26/2018 2:37:59 PM
-- Jakethebro on 2/21/2018 12:42:57 PM
Holy **** wow!!!! Sick and twisted all the way!
-- Dizastorm on 2/8/2018 10:29:33 PM
So, this is quite the cool game. A little gory, but I'm sure that's what it's for. I like it very much.
-- harrypotter on 1/25/2018 3:49:31 PM
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