Marvel Universe: Fallen

Player Rating3.18/8

"#768 overall, #87 for 2016"
based on 152 ratings since 04/21/2016
played 2,046 times (finished 221)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

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You are the newest member of the Avengers, Thomas Maxamoff, AKA. BloodRush. You are a 17 year old kid. Here is some back ground. You are the child of Wanda Maxamoff and The Vision. All powers that run in the family, you inherited.

*Chaos Magic Reality Warping
*Change your density on command
*Flight
*Super Speed (From your Uncle Pietro)
*Magnetic Manipulation (From Grandpa Magneto)

Are you ready? There are so many more powers that you have that you don't even know yet! You will discover them as you go. This is the current Avengers team.

*Captain America
*Iron Man
*Falcon
*Ms. Marvel
*Scarlet Witch
*Quicksilver
*Spider-Man
*Vision
*BloodRush

*Hawkeye

Player Comments

First of all, I noticed many grammatical errors. You capitalized some parts where it isn't even necessary. There was a lack of detail, and proper punctuation.

The plot structure was quite weak, and also your character development skills in the book. It wasn't that long, and the book seemed to be rushed.

I noticed that you wrote the book in a play-form, which disappointed me a little bit. I mean, you can't really express the character's emotions by writing in play-script. For example, in play-script when someone is suffering from crippling depression, you just write it like this: (Bob sighs and places his head in his lap). In the actual book script you can write it like this: "Why is fate always so unlucky for me?" Bob sighed as he glanced out at the downpour of rain outside. He felt a twinge of anger in his heart, and pure sadness, etc.

There is always room for improvement, and you can certainly try better than this; I believe in you. A touch of humour would be quite nice, and the little touch of romance was well placed. I wish that you just developed their feelings a bit better.

If you plan to make a part two, please add more details, make the story longer, develop the plot and don't rush it, don't write it in playscript and try not to make any grammatical errors, and I assure you that you will get a higher rating than you received on this one.

4/8. Certainly not the worst, but not the best either.
-- DiniTheWizard on 11/8/2017 10:00:21 PM with a score of 0
Honestly, it was ok, it wasn't too enjoyable though. I know the creator probably doesnt care but this doesn't line up with the mcu at all, seeing that spiderman doesnt join until civil war and vision doesn't survive till the end of infinity war. Also the plot was just kinda everywhere at once. Im not saying its bad, I just, don't really enjoy it.
-- austinamazingdude on 1/29/2020 3:13:03 PM with a score of 0
Omg. This was amazing
-- Kayla on 7/10/2019 1:55:57 PM with a score of 0
I like it alot, buuuuut, I don't like romance. However, I understand but would like to see as little as possible in the second one please.
-- Oren on 4/20/2019 9:32:10 AM with a score of 0
This was pretty cool!
-- Vicky on 12/15/2018 11:57:35 PM with a score of 0
Well, the plot was cool. Great idea. But the way your dialogue was formatted was really annoying to deal with. It was like reading a script, but not...? And it kept switching back and forth between quoatation marks and no quotation marks. You have to choose one and stick to it... And preferably stick with traditional dialogue and quotation marks!!
-- ViolinAndDeerstalker on 6/5/2018 3:31:53 PM with a score of 0
I'm a really huge marvel fan, so playing this game made me feel as if I were actually fighting. The author did an amazing job with the storytelling of the game so kudos to you! This person put some good researching into the game.
-- darkmagiciangirl on 5/20/2018 12:14:38 AM with a score of 0
It was great
-- Zach on 3/20/2018 4:40:46 AM with a score of 0
Loved the game??
-- Cameron on 11/17/2017 1:12:54 AM with a score of 0
Sorry, but this wasn't very impressive... Well, practice makes perfect, so keep up with it.
-- Griseo on 11/5/2017 4:21:45 PM with a score of 0
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