No Man`s Land (Zombie Survival)

Player Rating4.44/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 43 ratings since 10/28/2017
played 364 times (finished 39)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Just another zombie apocalypse story. I see too many that are either short, boring, or not that good story-wise. Just throwing this out there for people like me.
This is also my first story, so excuse any errors.

Player Comments

Wow. This was definitely good! I enjoyed reading this the first time through, and going through again, and again. Multiple paths and stories to take. This was well thought out and well written (despite a few, minor spelling mistakes).
There are some issues in continuity and plot that I had. Like, 'how long was I passed out in that car'? You stated that the surrounding structures were in various states of disrepair, which made me wonder how long I was out. Was it for a few hours? If so, then those zombies flooded that city faster than a tsunami. Was it a few days? If so, that's understandable, when looking back at Telltale's The Walking Dead, when Lee was unconscious for a few days in the Police Car. Was it for a couple months? If so, no. Not even Rick could have survived that long (luckily a doctor stayed behind and took care of him.)
But my issues aren't quantitative, as this story is well executed, and makes sense. You say this is your first story, so I'm excited to see what else you can conjure up!

6/8
-- Comic on 12/5/2017 12:04:19 PM with a score of 0
I must say that this was a pretty fantastic storygame overall. I've experienced many games with this exact setting, but I believe that you've done a pretty decent job with making sure that your story was both intuitive and interesting at the end of the day. There were a fair bit of choices and paths to be taken, so hats off to you on that front of things. I definitely see much promise and growth from you as a writer with what you displayed in your writing in this piece.

The idea for having achievements to be earned throughout the story was a concept that I found to be rather fascinating. While I do believe that maybe such at thing could have been better implemented, such as possibly having achievements with a bit more difficulty in achieving, and perhaps having all of the achievements that a reader was able to get displayed at whichever ending they received would have made the conclusion to a path more fulfilling.

While I did have my fair share of enjoyment with this story, I feel that some improvement could have been made with fleshing out the dialogue and giving it some more depth. I feel that such a decision would have made the choices feel more impactful, and the story as well by extension. Sometimes it simply felt that the emotional aspect of things took a backseat to other facets of this story, though those aspects that I feel that were given more focus weren't done poorly.

In conclusion, good work. This was a zombie game that I found myself enjoying with each achievement and ending that I received.
-- TharaApples on 11/6/2017 10:58:24 PM with a score of 0
So far I have played 5 times.
My plays:
1st playthrough
PRODUCT PLACEMENT achievement
WELCOME ABOARD achievement
BETTER TOGETHER ending

2nd playthrough
GAS STATION ending

3rd playthrough
PRODUCT PLACEMENT achievement
FOREST WHISPERER achievement
SO CLOSE ending
SUPER SECRET achievement

4th playthrough
PRODUCT PLACEMENT achievement
AT LEAST IT'S SOMETHING ending

5th playthrough
PRODUCT PLACEMENT achievement
LUNCH RUSH ending
-- realemosdontcut on 1/13/2018 12:12:26 PM with a score of 0
Better than the average story on here (particularly zombie stories). However I think writing should be a bit more descriptive and detailed to create more atmosphere & involvement with characters
-- llImperatorll on 12/27/2017 3:50:12 PM with a score of 0
I suggest in future stories like this you use the items system to help players organize and make it so you can go down the same path with different items
-- Fromnono on 12/26/2017 3:27:19 AM with a score of 0
Wow. To start off, I'd just like to say that the inspiration you took from Dead Man Walking is very abundant here, and most players should be able to pin it down from about a mile away.

Now, onto the actual story. It has its flaws, and comes off as a fairly generic post-apocalyptic storyline. I particularly found it ridiculous when, after four pages of clicking, I received the 'dehydration' ending.

But, it does its job as a zombie CYOA. It has zombies and a generic apocalypse, and your writing is certainly decent, albeit somewhat primitive.

This is actually a solid entry/game. Definitely not a feature-worthy adventure, but nothing in it is so bad that it justifies a removal from the site.

5/10
-- Comply on 12/18/2017 8:19:11 PM with a score of 0
hi this is great
-- en on 12/14/2017 1:27:40 PM with a score of 0
That was really cool, I did not die LOL best ending ever
-- pebble on 12/6/2017 5:11:01 PM with a score of 0
i do wish it would be longer
-- eh on 11/18/2017 2:21:17 AM with a score of 0
it is realy good the details are very good, one thing missing is lenght it should be longer and instead of doing 30 years later you should have like clips a few pages of years overall very good
-- Rapor on 11/17/2017 1:06:08 PM with a score of 0
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