No Man`s Land (Zombie Survival)

Player Rating4.44/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 25 ratings since 10/28/2017
played 217 times (finished 19)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Just another zombie apocalypse story. I see too many that are either short, boring, or not that good story-wise. Just throwing this out there for people like me.
This is also my first story, so excuse any errors.

Player Comments

I must say that this was a pretty fantastic storygame overall. I've experienced many games with this exact setting, but I believe that you've done a pretty decent job with making sure that your story was both intuitive and interesting at the end of the day. There were a fair bit of choices and paths to be taken, so hats off to you on that front of things. I definitely see much promise and growth from you as a writer with what you displayed in your writing in this piece.

The idea for having achievements to be earned throughout the story was a concept that I found to be rather fascinating. While I do believe that maybe such at thing could have been better implemented, such as possibly having achievements with a bit more difficulty in achieving, and perhaps having all of the achievements that a reader was able to get displayed at whichever ending they received would have made the conclusion to a path more fulfilling.

While I did have my fair share of enjoyment with this story, I feel that some improvement could have been made with fleshing out the dialogue and giving it some more depth. I feel that such a decision would have made the choices feel more impactful, and the story as well by extension. Sometimes it simply felt that the emotional aspect of things took a backseat to other facets of this story, though those aspects that I feel that were given more focus weren't done poorly.

In conclusion, good work. This was a zombie game that I found myself enjoying with each achievement and ending that I received.
-- TharaApples on 11/6/2017 10:58:24 PM with a score of 0
i do wish it would be longer
-- eh on 11/18/2017 2:21:17 AM with a score of 0
it is realy good the details are very good, one thing missing is lenght it should be longer and instead of doing 30 years later you should have like clips a few pages of years overall very good
-- Rapor on 11/17/2017 1:06:08 PM with a score of 0
I enjoyed the story. What happened to the kids?
-- iallen4 on 11/16/2017 6:35:10 AM with a score of 0
Super. Easy and fun. A great first story! I liked the addition of the achievements, made it more interesting and rewarding.
-- Galootius on 11/13/2017 2:03:47 PM with a score of 0
Sorry for the double post; I'm commenting from a phone. I just want to add that there are a few problems that I've noticed so far. Firstly, there's no reason a company would talk about a small disease outbreak over the loudspeaker. Secondly, your children seem to disappear from the story even though it's implied that they probably went home. Third, your wife isn't mentioned again if you go to the railroads. The latter 2 problems seem to be more about a lack of effort put into the details.
-- Victim on 11/10/2017 10:17:19 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good for a first game. I see a lot of people got the military rescue ending. I got the Better Together ending.
-- Victim on 11/10/2017 10:04:39 PM with a score of 0
Fun, but too short and the decisions were a bit obvious... still pretty good, much better than may I have tried.
-- RandomRedHead on 11/1/2017 2:02:58 PM with a score of 0
Fun... it seemed a bit short, but I ended up getting the military rescue ending. How high up the food chain is that? The sniper made everything easier, but yeah, this was definitely not utterly amazing, but a good story- I can see you put probably hours of work into it.
As for level of difficulty... I would give it a five maybe six. There were a few questionable decisions I made that unbelievably did not affect my survival. There was a bit more narrator-choosing-for-me than I’d like, but overall I’d give this a six rating- worth every cent.
-- Drought on 10/27/2017 5:13:06 PM with a score of 0
Military Rescue ending
Forest Whisperer
Found secret page
and some other achievement towards the beginning

All in all good story. It would be nice if it was longer though.
-- corgi213 on 10/26/2017 8:36:48 PM with a score of 0
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