Now You Gotta Deal With This S***

Player Rating5.79/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 44 ratings since 12/15/2016
played 274 times (finished 56)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

A tale told in verse. A text from your sister requesting a pick up from a party leads to a night of strangeness.

Inspired by Bucky's ballad contest. Though...I wouldn't call this a ballad. I'm not sure what I'd call it, actually, other than exceedingly stupid, and fun to write.

(Don't pay any attention to the scores, they're just for me to track which endings reviewers get.)

Player Comments

This was very entertaining and worth reading through a couple of times to see different outcomes.
-- _Zomby_ on 1/18/2017 10:36:04 AM with a score of 3
Very entertaining! 6/8
-- SonicTurboTurtle on 1/8/2017 2:07:38 AM with a score of 12
It was funny and had a good-if simple flow. Mizal was good enough at gross out humor to make me lol at some of the witty one liners, but by the end it was getting a bit stale. Over-reliance on tropes made it predictable. I think one of the ways in which Mizal could've fixed this, Would have been to flip some of the plot devices on their head. For example, I think it would have been a good move to replace the werewolf with something not-cringeworthyly obvious. Double points if it lead down a false path. It kinda feels unreplayable.

I'm not the biggest fan of ballads but all in all I think Mizal did a good job, and some of the faults might just be the problems with ballads.
-- Patar on 12/24/2016 1:45:55 PM with a score of 666
Great work! It took a while to get the best ending, but it was worth it!
-- ZagHero on 12/22/2016 5:39:19 PM with a score of 3
This is great. Very well-written and funny.
-- Lilan on 12/19/2016 7:35:13 PM with a score of 0
Funny and bloody disgusting, well done
-- Agstand on 12/17/2016 9:17:04 AM with a score of 0
Well, I now have pie.
I seem to have gotten the best end on my first try :)
-- Seto on 12/15/2016 10:36:47 PM with a score of 0
This was amusing.

It was quite linear in the beginning, but I like how you progressively got more choices, though the amount of RIP links was a bit annoying. I gave up keeping track of where I was going after a few. I still wonder what happens after you allegedly die.

Otherwise I really like the rhymes, and it has that classic mizal humor to it. Great job for a CYOA ballad. :D
-- Crescentstar on 12/15/2016 8:31:45 PM with a score of 4
Loved this.
-- Mage on 12/15/2016 8:18:35 PM with a score of 0
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