"Too few ratings to be ranked"
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"trek through the forest"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.
A quick game for you.
There are a lot of choices so that does speak to a bit of effort, but the writing itself is just....not good and the author doesn't understand a lot of basic things about people just to start with.
on 12/3/2019 8:33:40 PM with a score of 0
Grammar errors, pages without links, abrupt endings. This story is bad and should be unpublished.
on 12/3/2019 11:30:06 AM with a score of 0
Just... just bad. This storygame makes me feel like I'm patrolling for sentence-level errors. No wonder our prison system is so overburdened. 2/8
on 12/2/2019 9:22:51 PM with a score of 0
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