Save Your Dragon

Player Rating6/8

"it's worth every cent"
based on 72 ratings since 02/15/2012
played 1,117 times (finished 75)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

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RPGRPG

Your best friend, the dragon Redscale has been abducted by an unknown adversary. Get yourself a companion, find Redscale and find out who took him.

This is the remodeled version of the original. There will be more story and it is going to be longer. Some of the comments gave me an idea how to redo it.  The story has three sides to it. Thanks to the work of my Co-author, I've got a great story. For that, I thank him. 

Comments and ratings wanted to help for future stories!

Player Comments

Does Redscale really have to die? D:
-- toni on 3/8/2013 3:33:21 AM
Wow! That's really all I can say about this one. While there were some grammatical errors, they weren't such that it was impossible to read the story. Kai falls in love with Zaron? I never saw that one coming! Haru betrays the dragons and joins Quom? no big surprise there; she struck me as a bit of a bitter old lady from the very beginning. You know, in a way, it kind of reminds me of the Inheritance Cycle Books by Christopher Paolini. Thanks for an enjoyable read, and an even more enjoable gaming experience!
-- Veridian Malcolm on 3/2/2013 9:43:48 AM
great game
-- wolfblade239 on 2/10/2013 10:27:13 PM
There so should be another one involving the silver egg and Zaron's child it would be awesome.
-- hugo23 on 1/20/2013 4:23:23 PM
This was awesome! I hope you take advantage of the opportunity you gave yourself to have another one revolve around the silver egg and Zaron's inevitable child. This is certainly the best on I've ever played.
-- DragonHeart on 11/24/2012 4:35:39 PM
Good story, a well thought out plot, but two problems:
first, the choices that are available are all either death or "the right choice" none of the choices are flavor or customizable things, which add a sense of "you" to the story.
Secondly, the grammar/spelling is good, but not great. There are several places where the phrasing is awkward or there's a small typo. clean this up a bit and add a few more "flavor" options, and this will go from being "good" to being great :D
-- MagmaArmor0 on 11/18/2012 12:28:44 PM
Seth says MEH! I didn't feel like reading everything so i just skipped to the bottom and read the last sentence then picked a link :3
-- SethIsBeast on 10/30/2012 11:20:25 AM
I liked the story and found the characters interesting.
I was hoping for a larger character evolution, but for a short story it was pretty good.
Good job and keep writing!
~Castbound
-- Castbound on 7/2/2012 9:37:19 PM
This was an awesome game! A few spelling and grammar misteakes, but still good!
-- Amy2 on 6/22/2012 7:59:46 AM
It really bored me, but I know you tried really hard and the story does have something, so I give you a 5.
-- CovElite on 6/21/2012 10:23:32 PM
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