The Robots United

Player Rating3.34/8

"#706 overall, #24 for 2005"
based on 121 ratings since 04/08/2006
played 1,385 times (finished 127)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

Two robots are united to help save the earth from the evil space aliens. The robots are the only chance to help earth. If they fail, earth is doom.

But there is a truth of all. Someone among them is betraying. Who could it be? Play to find out!

*UPDATE FROM APRIL 8TH* I corrected the spelling mistakes and maybe grammar mistakes. Change what I said when you click on the wrong option, I didn't know I was that mean before.

Player Comments

Very ambitious plot. I think the main problem of this story was that there was no build-up to anything and many plot holes: what do I think of Sera? Who build us? Why is my identity not known? Who made the Sword of Tappa? How does it control aliens? Why is it in the volcano? What is the Bloodstone? How did the aliens conquer Earth in the first place? All of this questions SHOULD have been answered by the author in the story to get a feel and sense of the world we are in and how we fit in it. Instead the author plops the reader in the middle of everything and leaves us to figure it out. Furthermore the game needs to be fleshed out so much more; it seemed like every link either led to your death or continuation of the story, instead of this there needs to be actual choices that create new branches and varying story plots.
-- FazzTheMan on 7/15/2015 1:29:42 AM with a score of 0
Probably the worst introduction in a Cys game, or in any other IF. And a clear example, Of how telling not showing is far worse than anything else as introduction

"You are an elite robot. You have meet up with your friend who is another robot named Sera. No one knows what your name is so they called you Unknown. Now, you and your friend must work together to save the earth."

This is the introduction where you basically tell the entire story in five lines. With no context, no atmosphere, not build in the storyline or anything like that

The dialogue is ATROCIOUS with some of the more jarring dialogues ever made where you ask about stuff you don't even know what are.

Also, choices are blatantly false and lead to really bad design ugly atrocious endings

With an insulting message, Next time be smarter. Choose a better option next time.
-- poison_mara on 3/9/2020 9:38:25 PM with a score of 0
Plot Twist: Sera is a alien! poor Unknown...
-- Guest on 11/17/2018 9:46:13 AM with a score of 0
Me and my mom liked this story very much, accept for the part where Sera shoots you dead, WAY too much for the rating. Anyways, thank you for making this!
-- Jaydn Strid on 9/7/2017 12:32:32 AM with a score of 0
I didn't really get anything from this game. Concepts like the Bloodstone and "Volcano of Doom" were thrown in out of nowhere with no explanation, to the point that I wondered if this was a parody. Maybe it is?

Well, the first line is "You are an elite robot" so I guess that says it all. The ending wasn't very satisfying but I see that you were going for a sequel. Also, the font hurt my eyes.
-- Saika on 3/30/2017 5:49:32 AM with a score of 0
Interesting concept . . . needs work on grammar and description though
-- Kwism1127 on 8/31/2013 8:02:27 AM with a score of 0
Very, intriguing.. I like it!
-- Skysworne on 8/22/2013 12:14:07 AM with a score of 0
Not bad for a story about flying robots ^_^
-- Briar_Rose on 11/17/2012 4:55:30 PM with a score of 0
It was alright. I enjoyed it, but too linear. If not A then B. More plot and character development would be nice. Multiple endings would be nice, and not just 1 good ending and the rest bad endings. that's two endings.Keep at it!
-- ChaiHai on 8/12/2012 6:18:15 AM with a score of 0
-- RobustSporadic on 6/10/2012 12:08:03 AM with a score of 0
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