The White One

a Horror by TheUnknown

Commended by BerkaZerka on 9/21/2019 9:22:22 AM

Player Rating5.25/8

"#197 overall, #20 for 2012"
based on 163 ratings since 08/22/2012
played 2,677 times (finished 185)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.




By The Unknown

Player Comments

I enjoyed this game a lot. You clearly put a lot of effort into it and I myself am a fan of Slenderman. You did a great job describing the environments I was placed in. Very large amount of detail, loved the pictures. However, I felt it was a bit too short, but that's alright. I don't know if it's been said but there is a bug I encountered. In the hospital if you use the scalpel first instead of the crowbar on the girl then back out and go back you can't use the crowbar to get the key and progress through the story. 6/8 great job.
-- Greencloud on 8/28/2012 12:46:27 PM with a score of 10
I loved it. The slender man has always been super creepy in my opinion and he is a fantastic villain. Your use of items was excellent and I really enjoyed having to figure out what to use and when to get what was needed. I give it a 7/8 and I hope you make a sequel or build more on this one. I'd love to know why slender man took you and what he will do next :)
-- simplesabley on 8/25/2012 3:08:38 PM with a score of 10
This was my first time going through an entire story on this site. I only went through once and thankfully finished it to the end alive, but I can see how somebody could easily not make it if they aren't both thorough & curious. I'm sure as time goes on I'll have a better understanding of what makes a good or bad story but for now I very much enjoy this & I was transported somewhere else for the duration of my experience.
-- XIIIVampire on 1/21/2021 7:16:32 PM with a score of 10
Short, but cool. Though a bit buggy and that bug impedes the progression of the story. Amount of using objects is good. Good potential, debugging and making the story a bit longer would be appreciated.
-- mkyushin on 9/8/2019 1:56:53 PM with a score of 10
A bit buggy.
-- Geordie on 5/14/2019 7:15:09 AM with a score of 10
I don't know what I did wrong but I died lol. Still it was a good game despite it's short. So I think it deserved a higher rating than 5-ish. Some gamestory with higher rating than this one shuck big time !
-- Kuro on 3/7/2019 2:33:59 PM with a score of 10
This game is really fun but when I use the scalpel in front of my guirl I was thinking of cut the rope not what append. And for the crowbar I don’t think was a good idea.
-- Sauvage cat on 10/23/2018 10:43:04 AM with a score of 10
This game was really fun but when i use the scalpel in front of my girls i was thinking of cut the rope not what append. And for the crowbar i don’t think that it is a good idea.
-- Chat sauvage on 10/23/2018 10:42:50 AM with a score of 10
Interesting, with a good dose of creepiness. The game overall was pretty entertaining, but I wished there was more to the ending...
-- crazygurl on 7/7/2017 2:57:34 PM with a score of 10
Wonderfully crafted.
-- BMO on 3/27/2017 4:56:40 PM with a score of 10
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