Virtual Video Game

Player Rating3.63/8

"#403 overall, #46 for 2006"
based on 304 ratings since 04/24/2006
played 2,915 times (finished 308)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.



One day you were sitting at home bored, so you deside to go to EB games. There you find a new kind of video game. One with multiplayer capabilitys with any other gaming system within 300 yards! Not only that but its a virtual reality game. You just snap on the helmet, and think of what you want to do or say and BAM! You say or do what you thought in the game! But then things go wrong. Things get to real. Like the kids at school that are dissapearing and all of them own a copy of the game...

Please note that this is my first game and I would love some feedback. Please tell me what you think! Also tell me what the maturity level and the difficulty level should be. Thanks!

Note: Most of the Game Overs in this book lead directly to the End game and leave comments page. This is to avoid people cheating and pressing the back button. But if you remember your path, you shouldnt have a proble getting back to where you were.

Player Comments

The fact you can buy cheat codes and use them is a good idea. Unfortunately, I rarely got a choice to use some of them, and when I did, didn't make much sense. Also, I'd like to hear more about how the kids at school are disappearing. That plot point sort of got dropped and suddenly I was just fighting the boss. Maybe I skipped too well with cheat codes. A decent effort.
-- madglee on 8/23/2006 5:28:48 PM with a score of 0
I did like it, and sorta did not. But it was very very fun, completedin about 5-10 minutes!
-- Existence on 9/8/2017 12:29:38 AM with a score of 0
A lot of this depended entirely on guesswork and chance...
-- crazygurl on 7/13/2017 9:41:54 PM with a score of 0
The story was way to confusing and based on randomness to be good. It also had lots of grammar errors, making it really hard to read.
-- Nonono on 5/22/2017 3:23:14 PM with a score of 0
-- Harry Potter on 3/10/2017 4:49:19 AM with a score of 0
Lots and lots of grammar errors that made reading difficult. I also don't agree with losing based on what I clicked on rather than using any really thought process. It might be better without the backstory of the missing classmates. It doesn't really seem to fit.
-- Quorrah on 2/26/2017 4:36:15 PM with a score of 0
Great job.[I just say this to cheer people up.]
-- Stormfeather on 11/23/2016 3:21:20 PM with a score of 0
Well I have honestly no idea why I couldn't stop reading it. It did have many many spelling errors one time due to a spelling error I couldn't even figure out what was going on but the awesome story made up for everything also I love the idea of having to guess which link to press instead of having to look for hints throughout the storygame. overall a good read but because of the spelling errors I only gave it a 7/8 I would advise you to proofread
-- TinyTerd10 on 11/20/2016 10:20:38 PM with a score of 0
Honestly, I guess it has a good plot and all. Words and maybe grammer could and should be improved. Partial extra sentences and words. Either way, good effort but could be improved to be amazing.
-- WhisperingFlower on 10/4/2016 7:23:04 PM with a score of 0
So, little boring but still a little fun
-- AmesomeSauce on 9/7/2016 3:57:51 PM with a score of 0
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