Without Time

Player Rating1.74/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 38 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

You are Marlin sings a 16 year old guy who can't quite fit in until you meet Sarah and life goes on and on.

Player Comments

Kind of entertaining.......
-- MasonJarGuzzi on 3/11/2016 10:53:03 PM
Great, now just add some choices that lead to something other than sidebars and you'll have an actual CYOA, rather than, y'know, a story with awkward sidebars...
-- ISentinelPenguinI on 1/14/2016 2:37:09 PM
This was not a storygame, it was a story. It literally had no choices, just two parts where you could read an extra bit.
-- Steve24833 on 12/30/2015 4:01:22 PM
What? No choices! What kind of choose your story was this? I am telling you know that this will be unposted by you, or a high ranking member because the lack of choices. The story was a little cleaver though, but no choices hurt the story greatly.
-- hayesa on 12/18/2015 3:44:11 PM
You didn't have enough choices for the readers in the story.
-- _Zomby_ on 12/18/2015 12:52:35 PM
You worked hard. I can see a lot of time went into this.
Not bad. Not bad at all.
-- Shadowulf on 12/15/2015 9:10:24 AM
Well, it was a good effort, but you need to work on your grammar. Also, this story wasn't really a "choose your own story" because everything followed a specific order. It was more like a short story than a interactive one. I would have liked it more if it could branch off into more endings and ideas.
-- CurseOfTime on 12/11/2015 5:53:25 PM
This is just a story, not a game.
There are grammatical and spelling errors as well as barely any punctuation. The plot itself is too fast paced and too random with few explanations. It just feels like it has been written quickly and published.

More effort is required to make a game that is atleast considered okay.
So try harder.
-- YarikCool on 12/11/2015 12:36:20 AM
Entirely linear, needs polishing.
-- Kiel_Farren on 12/10/2015 11:48:56 PM
This isn't a choose your own story because there are not any choices. Most of the writing quality is ok but you might want to put speech on different lines when people speak,
"like this",
because it makes it easy to read. Also some of your word choices and punctuation are a little unusual...
-- Will11 on 12/10/2015 10:49:53 PM
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