Your Birthday

Player Rating4.11/8

"#279 overall, #30 for 2013"
based on 300 ratings since 01/10/2013
played 6,971 times (finished 369)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

Ashna,

As I said, I can't be there with you for your birthday, but I hope this is the next best thing for you.

Happy Birthday baby. I love you; enjoy your 'game'! <3

Sidenote: This "game" is taken as both perspectives of myself and you, Ash.  :3

 

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Anybody else who decides to play this... Don't.   :3  This is meant only for my girl. It'll just be really awkward for you if you do play this. 

Player Comments

This was pretty cute... Some endings were rather 'interesting' to say the least, buuuut this was written quite well and was rather fun to read, despite this being rather short.

You obviously have a way with words ^^
-- TharaApples on 11/11/2016 2:45:28 PM
I know you said you only wanted your girlfriend to read this but... Screw that! I want the point for rating it. You're a pretty good writer by the way, well done, I'm sure your girlfriend will love it. ^_^
-- Briar_Rose on 1/10/2013 5:35:11 PM
AWESOME with caps because it's good... Only a few grammar mistakes... But over all it's good!
-- mmmmhmm on 1/16/2017 8:34:37 PM
Good
-- magicchess29 on 11/4/2016 3:04:22 AM
boring
-- laxkay on 9/19/2016 4:43:53 PM
This sucks
-- Derp on 8/22/2016 9:51:54 AM
Terrible.
-- Kate on 5/26/2016 8:02:38 PM
didnt know what fun was either... oh. and, WOLF
-- thebigE on 4/24/2016 8:13:45 AM
very, VERY awkward
-- thebigE on 4/24/2016 8:12:39 AM
Very well written. But yes, very awkward indeed.
-- SonicTurboTurtle on 3/24/2016 2:57:33 AM
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