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Shortly after moving into a small town....
You keep getting strange emails....
They appear to be clues to find a book of your ancestry....
Upon moving into a small town, you get emails. These aren't just strange emails either. They actually come from your dying grandfather who wants your family to be informed about your family history. But, in order to do so, you must retrieve a book using hints he keeps sending via email. This requires a journey similar to involving flying badgers (0.o), to bullies who pick on new kids in the town.
WARNING: I should've added this earlier, but anyway, There are instances of character death and mutilation. If that isn't your thing, then don't play this game. You have been warned.
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Need Idea for Story on 1/18/2016 11:16:12 AMI need an idea for a story I am about to write, and what category it belongs in. This is my idea for the first page.
It was a normal Saturday in the small town of Indian Arrow*. Kids were playing in their backyards, parents were commuting to their daily jobs in neighboring communities, and teachers were relaxing. But in this town, something feels out of place...
A family is actually moving in for once! But who is this family you ask? Well, it is the Bayuk family from Brandenburg*, with their 13-year-old son Elias, and his older brother, Matthew.
"We finally made it!"
"But it's just a boring ass small town."
"Shut the fuck up, Elias."
As you can see, Elias, and his father don't exactly have a good relationship with each other. This is because he forces the family to move constantly, even when his job hasn't been transferred to another location. After this argument, Elias is forced out of the house. Elias decides to:
(Insert choices)
Note: * denotes that it isn't a real location. Brandenburg is a real city in Kentucky, but let's not get into that yet.
So, what do you guys think? What should this story be about? Also, did I even post this in the right section? And yes, this is in third person omniscient for some reason. Note that this is just a sample. The real first page of the story most likely won't be this short.