Davidicus, The Reader
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10/25/2018
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I am just a guy who loves to read and write.
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The Super Soldier.
unpublished
Genres,
Serious
War
You'll play a character named Jason, who works for a government he detests, but has no say so in the matter. He must defeat a group of freedom fighters, or be controled via a microchip in his brain. Note: this is my first story so please let me know if their is bad writing, or if I have misspelled anything.
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My story: warning, it's not done yet. on 10/28/2018 8:50:16 PMI changed the things you said to change. Plus I removed some things I thought were irrelevant, redundant, or felt wrong to me.
Thanks for the advice.
My story: warning, it's not done yet. on 10/28/2018 2:55:00 PM
If you want, you can play this story and comment about it on this thread.
Warning, it's not done yet, I just finished writing the third page, this is more so I can have people critique it, and find problems I didn't.
Thanks in advance.
link: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-super-soldier~2e
