20 years, what left of this wasteland is bodies, whether they would be corpses or the infected. Since day one, you only know the martial law of this corrupted city. No one is allowed to slack off, everyone must work. It doesn't matter what disabilities you have. You don't work, you don't stay...or worse.

Keep in mind, this is my first. There will probably misspellings, grammar errors, etc. Some criticism is appreciated so I can do better.

I've been pondering this for awhile, and I wanted to ask experienced story creators.

How do you know if you put too much description or enough choices?

1st. Thanks for clearing it up for me and my word choice.

Any shade of blue honestly, if I had to pick an absolute favorite. Gotta go for Baby Blue

Actually no I don't convert an antagonist into a protagonist. But thanks for informing me about the stuff you mention. I don't intentionally do such mistakes. But thanks for reading at least, maybe I read some of your stories.

First things first, you can call me Dem or Demora. I don't mind either one. Second, a friend of mine showed me this website and I almost fell in love with the concept. She told me it was a great place to practice my writing and get feed back. No she doesn't own an account here but comes to this site quite often.

I like to write gory, suspenseful, plot turning stories. I also like to write from a Antagonist's' POV. Odd yes, but I've been rooting for Disney villains since I was a little girl. Maleficent specifically. My favorite color is blue, and I like to write stories as you know already. Expect plot twists in some of my publishes, as well as gore, and Rate-R scenarios. I don't sugar coat often, and I try to be somewhat realistic in my stories(even in my fantasy prompts).

I hope you enjoy yourselves and thanks for reading this post.