Grandreaver, The Reader
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Eternal: The Eternalborn Expansion is released! on 10/17/2013 12:33:52 AMI can already tell most of the rest of the site doesn't measure up to Endmaster's stories. Even so, I'm more than glad I found this place for his storygames alone.
Eternal: The Eternalborn Expansion is released! on 10/16/2013 4:30:10 AM
This is such a fantastic story. I had no idea this site existed until a few days ago and I've spent all that time since exploring this novel. I can't believe you've created something so long and involved and aren't being paid for it. My favorite is definitely the True Eternal paths, the darkness and black humor that's engrained in them simply make them so interesting. Especially in the characterization, with people as twisted as the Emperor, Mistress, and the MC and as fanatical as Decena and Jennifer. In fact, I found the character of Mistress to be the most complex of the story. Is there any ending where she ends of up with the MC (aside from the city barrier against the Xi bad ending)? I can imagine an epilogue where the MC gives in to her and they continue on together would be very intriguing.