ImmortalBeggar, The Reader
Alright since this looks too empty , here let me add some short catchphrases made by me on random occassions , to give you some idea of how my thought process might work ...
"Since we all define our own limits , I simply limit my definations ~"
"Predict your past , and recall your future , thats time travel 101"
For now only these two come to my mind will add more as I recall them ~
Recent PostsPoetry prompt: Narrative poetry on 4/2/2020 10:13:31 PM
Yep , not American .
So I googled it hmm .... A curious way of making people hurry along , especially when logic tells that in a hurry you would simply use less syllables instead like for example go go go ~
Poetry prompt: Narrative poetry on 4/2/2020 10:06:16 PM
A good poem , solidity in your lines
And the struggle of day and night , hats off !
Poetry prompt: Narrative poetry on 4/2/2020 9:35:53 PM
Come on cut this noob some slack
Posion lady ?? , next time I will just conjure
Up some random beauty as sacrifice ?? for your
Furry desires ~
Poetry prompt: Narrative poetry on 4/2/2020 9:23:34 PM
Alright the poem was great ,
cool rhyming with appropriate timing ,
but cant help but ask whats that at the end boogity?
it kinda breaks the whole ....um aftertaste?
Poetry prompt: Narrative poetry on 4/2/2020 9:19:47 PM
....(sweating ) its Lappy as in laptop ......
Poetry prompt: Narrative poetry on 4/2/2020 9:09:01 PM
Well , u surely can churn out words better than me , so +10
A bit darkish , i guess the hospital does that to , the best of us...
hey but on the bright side you got bitten and now have
the chance of advancing your class to a eternal zombie B2 (>_<) ~
alright enough messing around i am not a qualified enough expert on poems but ,
its just that some lines or phrases , just don't roll off all that easily, at times.
though your composition is quite complex not in general story but styling , it keeps changing
i have no method or techniques just my instincts , that tell me you surely can polish it to the next level ,
sometimes removing words are more helpfully than adding em .
and this general tip that i read somewhere long long ago and it just got stuck to me ...
"How do you know if what u wrote is correct or proper enough ? just read it once or twice and see if it all feels harmonious , if it isn't u will just know , even if you don't understand the cause , you can sense the disharmony in it"
Poetry prompt: Narrative poetry on 4/2/2020 8:18:54 PM
Alright i am what u might call an armature at this, so pardon my meagre skills...
All i have is my instinct and intution to guide me through this poetic endavour.
A poem ! she requested ,
thats all ?... I grew intrested~
i thought a while ,
i rummaged my ol pile ,~
but it was all missing !
thus my reminiscing...
i wonder a awhile...
i pondered a mile !
sadly, nothing comes to mind ~
thus i crashed in blind !
figured it can take a while ,
wondered if it was worthwhile ?
to look for those fickle words ,
and turn em to mighty birds !
this was no simple task !
but tis was all , she asked !
so i looked at my trusty mate ,
i said "Lappy" this is our fate !
lets write some tales ~
of fellow scholars and heroic females .
So , here we are with my idotic smile ,
wondering, pondering & turning senile ~
- Immortal Beggar \|0_o| /
(might as well dedicate to ShoujoAddict , afterall she dragged me in this .... )
oh right poems are supposed to have a titlee too right? thats the hardest part ...ummm
alright here goes nothing : "Tackling Poem at Dawn ."