https://corporate.ford.com/articles/sustainability/ford-mcdonalds-coffee-bean-car-parts-collaboration.html

This is for laughs, but it is actually a pretty interesting article. Sorry for my bad humor.

(Since it's an article about Ford... and McDonald's)

Alrighty, I have no problem rearranging that. Thanks!

I'm currently working on my first CYOA, and I have a clear understanding of how I want the result to be. A good ending is always something a reader enjoys, but introductions are just as important. What I really want to accomplish first (since I mapped everything out already) is the description, which grabs the reader's attention. It'll give the readers the background of who they are and what they'll face. I was wondering if this did the job:

Description for Story:

In your third year of being an FBI Agent, you thought you had seen it all, the worst of the worst. However, you receive a case concerning Alex Milton, a former FBI Agent who went rogue and pulled off an armed robbery and murder. You team up with Andrea, a snarky detective, to bring justice to Chicago’s streets. As you come closer and closer to pinning Alex down, the truth unfolds, leaving you with a hard decision. 

Background:

You are Clinton Rogers, a male FBI Agent who graduated from the 20-week training 3 years ago. Upon graduation, you received your gun, badge, and credentials. You are 34, and in impeccable shape, since your field requires it. You reside in Chicago, in a third-story apartment, and your office is stationed at the FBI Chicago Field Office. 

Additional Notes:

There is some vulgar language in this, especially derogatory, so YOU'VE BEEN WARNED. 

Throughout the story, more characters will be shown and interacted with.

Please leave comments notifying me of any bugs, grammar mistakes, or typos. I look forward to all your feedback. I am also open to any recommendations!

Any thoughts before I begin the actual writing?

Hello all, I am JUSTHERE.

I'm not brand new to this site, as I have already spent days reading the well-thought-out stories provided. I'm not secretly stirring up my own storygame just yet, however, I plan to do so in the near future (This COVID-19 situation is giving me ample free time). When I'm online, feel free to message me as I'm always free for a small chat.