A young man and a vision,

Standing in Burning Raven street, upon the recent discovery of his superpowers, a young man becomes obsessed with the idea of forming a team of people with superhuman attributes, but what will the true fate of this man be?

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Note that this is my first advanced editor story and that English isn`t my mother tongue, that being said, feel free to correct my grammar and give feedback

NOTE: English isn't my mother's tongue, so don't expect the best grammar and writing, although i could certainly improve.
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After an ominous dream involving an eerie corpse, the thought of a decomposing body gets stuck into your mind.
Will you try to get it out of your head? or will you instead try to live with the idea of a death body constantly bugging?

Thanks, i thought it was far worse. Yeah, sometimes i use the wrong symbol, i will consider your advice for my next update.

So basically, English is not my mother's tongue , as so my written English is not the best, however i just realized how clunky it is after proofreading my storygame. Then,  do i need a few months of practicing my English to start writing seriously? or you wish you were blind just by reading my storygame?

Note that this is merely a storygame drafting wannabe an the fact that i started using the advanced editor because i had previous experience in coding and CYA websites.

LINK: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Headquarters