Haha!! My guy did the same thing! And, I think you're partially right on the romance thing. I think it should be a definite option, but in a classy way, not focus so much on the sexual parts, although that's good too. It should just be a way to immerse yourself further into the story.

Granted, but you are so happy, that you become distracted, and fall off a cliff and die.

I wish that I didn't take the time to read every single one of these before I posted.

Yes, Pre-Oblivion. I liked Oblivion, but from what I have experienced, Morrowind had better story. And post-Oblivion looks pretty FREAKING amazing. And so far in the story, I'm having kinda in training, because you don't really know how to use a sword when you take care of sheep. And, for people who have played the Mass Effect or Dragon Age games, there is CONFIRMED romance in the story.

Ok, I didn't know about the name, I have Gothic IV, and No matter what faction you join, you can always retain your morals. Oh, and Elder Scrolls makes Gothic IV its bitch.

Hey guys and girls. I am working my new story, The Citadel of Virtue, and I was just looking to gather some (constructive) criticism on the plot. It goes smething like this. The main character, Aedan, is an apprentice shepherd when the port city he lives in, Oceania, is attacked. While the city is burning, Aedan escapes, well not really escapes, mor like gets knocked on the head and is saved by a traveler. He wakes up in a castle of some sort, and is brough to a huge decision, that diverts the story into two different plots, The Phoenix and The Raven storyline. The Phoenix story is one that focuses on being the so-called good guy, always being helpful and peaceful and ultimately a paragon of good. The Raven story is more of a renegade story, where the ends justify the means. This story is more of a story than a game, involving less decisions, but still plenty, and more story. So, what do you think?