Talon7122, The Reader

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The Citadel of Virtue: Back to the drawing board on 6/13/2012 6:48:09 PM
Thank you, kind person.

The Citadel of Virtue: Back to the drawing board on 6/12/2012 10:01:30 PM
Thanks!(:

The Citadel of Virtue: Back to the drawing board on 6/12/2012 4:09:24 PM
Good afternoon, gentlemen and ladies, I hope this forum post finds you well. As you may know, I've been hard at work on my storygame, The Citadel of Virtue. I was well into my fourth chapter, when I thought I would take a break from writing new stuff, and go back and read through what I had so far. I was very excited to do this because I hadn't even touched that section of writing in over a year! When i went back, I came to a terrible realization. Everything I had written was a reflection on who I was back then, a childish, non-mature writer, who just wanted to rush through the writing, just to get it out. As a much more mature person, who has come to many revelations in the past year, I am returning to the start of the story, and revising it to fit what I want it to be, not some cheap, rushed story. Again, I hope this post finds you well.

The Citadel of Virtue on 11/8/2011 5:57:50 PM

Haha!! My guy did the same thing! And, I think you're partially right on the romance thing. I think it should be a definite option, but in a classy way, not focus so much on the sexual parts, although that's good too. It should just be a way to immerse yourself further into the story.


Wish and Pay the Price Game! on 11/6/2011 4:15:18 AM

Granted, but you are so happy, that you become distracted, and fall off a cliff and die.

I wish that I didn't take the time to read every single one of these before I posted.


The Citadel of Virtue on 11/6/2011 1:16:28 AM

Yes, Pre-Oblivion. I liked Oblivion, but from what I have experienced, Morrowind had better story. And post-Oblivion looks pretty FREAKING amazing. And so far in the story, I'm having kinda in training, because you don't really know how to use a sword when you take care of sheep. And, for people who have played the Mass Effect or Dragon Age games, there is CONFIRMED romance in the story.


The Citadel of Virtue on 11/5/2011 1:17:26 AM

Ok, I didn't know about the name, I have Gothic IV, and No matter what faction you join, you can always retain your morals. Oh, and Elder Scrolls makes Gothic IV its bitch.


The Citadel of Virtue on 11/1/2011 8:01:38 PM

Hey guys and girls. I am working my new story, The Citadel of Virtue, and I was just looking to gather some (constructive) criticism on the plot. It goes smething like this. The main character, Aedan, is an apprentice shepherd when the port city he lives in, Oceania, is attacked. While the city is burning, Aedan escapes, well not really escapes, mor like gets knocked on the head and is saved by a traveler. He wakes up in a castle of some sort, and is brough to a huge decision, that diverts the story into two different plots, The Phoenix and The Raven storyline. The Phoenix story is one that focuses on being the so-called good guy, always being helpful and peaceful and ultimately a paragon of good. The Raven story is more of a renegade story, where the ends justify the means. This story is more of a story than a game, involving less decisions, but still plenty, and more story. So, what do you think?