Hey guys and girls. I am working my new story, The Citadel of Virtue, and I was just looking to gather some (constructive) criticism on the plot. It goes smething like this. The main character, Aedan, is an apprentice shepherd when the port city he lives in, Oceania, is attacked. While the city is burning, Aedan escapes, well not really escapes, mor like gets knocked on the head and is saved by a traveler. He wakes up in a castle of some sort, and is brough to a huge decision, that diverts the story into two different plots, The Phoenix and The Raven storyline. The Phoenix story is one that focuses on being the so-called good guy, always being helpful and peaceful and ultimately a paragon of good. The Raven story is more of a renegade story, where the ends justify the means. This story is more of a story than a game, involving less decisions, but still plenty, and more story. So, what do you think?