Take on the role of an entity, self-aware and yet aware of so little. You don't know what you are, where you are, or even why you were created. All you know is... you are alone. Survive the solitude, discover your hidden potential, and uncover the mystery of your creation.

Hey, thanks and yes, that is my site, though it's quite old. I stopped updating it a while ago... The project of Thaedos (including all the races you see there and more) is still constantly under development, but it won't be completed for a long time.

It worked with me, heh. That's a good idea though, I'll include a disclaimer in the beginning. Thanks.

Thanks for the tip.

Honestly EndMaster, I enjoyed Ground Zero more than Mommy exactly because you had a much deeper storyline (with surprising variations based on the choices made) that really pulled me in. The lack of game elements didn't really phase me since the story was so good. I purposely sought out bad endings first because I was curious about all of it (but didn't want a bad ending to be the last thing I see, haha). That said though, they can really do much if I don't provide an End Game link on the early deaths, can they? In other words, they'd have no choice but to play through the better parts of the game. While I'm trying to follow your lead and make even the deaths "enjoyable", making it too easy for the player would detract from the lonely and hostile atmosphere that is supposed to exist early on. I appreciate your advice though, thanks!

I guess someone should make a post to the Bug forum then eh? Though I get the feeling the people who handle that already know about it, so it probably won't be fixed anytime soon. Doesn't really matter I guess, it's not a big deal to check your own threads regularly, and it's not like the threads here get spammed down at high speed since the activity is fairly low.

Yeah, I was afraid of that... I'll consider how to make it more friendly in the beginning. Though if Ground Zero is anything to go back, early deaths can still be appreciated if done right.

I think it will be a bit of both, and it depends partly on what choices you make in the game. At the start, it's more philosophical, but action kicks in if you manage to survive the beginning. Once I have more pages done I'll offer more. Thanks for the input!

I'm pretty confused about this myself, so I'll just let you two sort this out?

The title, which may change, is "To Be Created" and this is the description for it:

"Take on the role of an entity, self-aware and yet aware of so little. You don't know what you are, where you are, or even why you were created. All you know is... you are alone. Survive the solitude, discover your hidden potential, and uncover the mystery of your creation."

I've been working on it for the past few days after I got comfortable with the Advanced Editor, and while I have another project I also want to work on (it will be far less serious and more of a dungeon crawl), I feel very strongly about this one. I don't think it's been done before, and I look forward to fleshing out the story more. Here's the first page for those interested, and I'd love some constructive feedback:

"Creation, such a mysterious thing. Suddenly knowing you exist, but not what you are, where you are, or even why you exist at all. No one to guide you or give you company, no purpose...

How do you even tell yourself apart from the void surrounding you? You can't, there's no difference. You're not sure if its a part of you, or you're a part of it, but it's impossible to distinguish. You're slowly losing your sense of self...

If only there was something, anything, other than you, that you could distinguish yourself from...

If only something else existed...

If only...

...

A mechanical voice stirs you from your slumber. You don't understand what it's saying, and due to it speaking in montone, you can't guess its intent either. Still, a part of you feels relieved. That dream made you uneasy, and this new stimulus has dispelled that unpleasant feeling. Now you know, there is something other than you out there. For a while, that keeps you content.

...then the voice stops speaking...

You wait, hoping it will start again. Somehow, you're even more uneasy than before. That voice provided comfort, and now you're afraid you may never have that again. Did you do something wrong? Perhaps something was expected, but because you failed to understand, it left? You begin to feel depressed. You wish you understood, but now it's too late.

You are alone again...

..."

That's all for now. I'll update with a new post once I make further progress.

I agree completely. I've only been a member for a short time but it gets annoying having to untick that box everytime I make a post or reply.