Set a 200 years in future, you are a lieutenant of federation space forces, and your task is to capture a pirate ship

Be a smuggler, trader or pirate in star wars universe... this is my first game and sory for my bad english...

Tnx for advice dear, but i have a problem with adding a link on page. And for spelling or gramatical mistake i will fixed later...

People i need a help again... i started to making my story games and i have litle problem:

I make a 2 pages, first is

Meeting in a spaceport bar
One day you're sitting in a bar in Mos Eisley and observe other beings in the bar.
And while you're enjoying the third round ofCorelians whiskey, feel a hand on your shoulder and whisper Ben Mezrick, are you?

here is a link to another page : who is it?

who is it?
You put your hand on blaster and turn to see a noghri like a cat. He repeated the question: Are you a captain Ben Mezrick?
No, but he is my good friend you ask.
Noghri: Captain Mezrick good bluff, but we know you're lying.
Captain, we have a specific job for you Are you interested?
Ohh he knows who you are ... unfortunately he found out your real identity ...
Listen creature, I do not need a job, you understand? You asked quietly.Captain, you have a chance to earn a huge amount of money. Pulled from his pocket a credit card in the amount of 50,000 credits, adding it is only half, the other half after the job is finished ...
You: that is large sum of money. What i must to do for this money?
Noghri: do you accept a job captain? He smiles
You: okay you creature you have me for this job.
Noghri: okay captain we goo out from here to walking and talking about job...

but when i switch on edit mode and on first page i click on button add link i see this:

Server Error
500 - Internal server error.
There is a problem with the resource you are looking for, and it cannot be displayed.

Is it any eror or what? and how i to fixed this problem?

Hi guys, i'm new member and i wont to create a story game set in star wars universe in which main character is a smuggler captain and hi have a ship and ship mate and together goo on adventures in galaxy... What we thinking about this tematic all suggest is welcomen... Sory but english is not my national language, and is verry bad...

Hi people i'm new on this site. I have a problem. Wheen i try to creating my storygame, i can not do that becouse : Microsoft VBScript runtime error '800a0006'
Overflow: 'CInt'
/my/creator/gamePage.vbs, line 142

What is it, and how to fix it?