orionshine, The Reader

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Proofreaders? on 7/20/2025 10:35:08 PM
I found some code in the text while reading, %%TAKEJACK%=%1%, it shows twice on the same page when aj is with jack trying to enter the combination for a bike rack lock. %%TAKEJACK%=%1% shows again on the page where aj tries to open the sewer grate and faces a mini horde to give jack some time to hide. I just got ending 7. I didn't see any text or actions/choices that seemed out of place, and I was able to follow the story easily. I'll add more to this once I reach another ending. Also, sorry if I'm not too helpful besides pointing out the code. I'll maybe have more to say after I've read more.

Need proofreaders for my story? (Zombie Survival) on 7/20/2025 9:36:48 PM
Ok, well I am in a different state of mind now and hopefully I can still help in some way

Need proofreaders for my story? (Zombie Survival) on 7/20/2025 9:32:15 PM
how do i delete this?

Need proofreaders for my story? (Zombie Survival) on 7/20/2025 2:16:18 AM
ill proofread your story .idk how ive never done this befoer after im less dizzy we can learn together. how do i read it ? zombies. ill play a woman and i liked dead man walking i havent read it in years/ how to read this sneek peak