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I'm not really sure what the process is here for proofreaders but I need a few for a new story I'm developing.

I'm only about three chapters in but here is the premise so far:

A zombie/monster survival story. Player is a young woman that is trying to find her friends across the city. I read Dead Man Walking, and it's similar but set at a slower pace i think.

I mainly need proofreaders that will play multiple times and test out different endings. I want to both make sure the writing is alright and that the code is working, because there are lots of variables and restrictions. As you read, just let me know your general thoughts and if you find any bugs. (If you like it, feel free to suggest story elements to add in later chapters. I want to write what the people want to read!)

If you're interested, message me I guess. Or leave a comment and we can figure out how to do this.

I'm honestly not even really sure how to make my story visible to proofreaders without publishing so let me know that process as well if you can.

Sure, I'll do it. Change your story to sneak peek mode and I'll be able to see it. Sounds exciting!

Edit(07/20/2025): I checked it out! I liked it a lot, and gave more feedback on the other thread. Hope you see it! Keep writing, this stuff is really good, and it will be a very cool horror story!

i put it in sneak peek mode! sry about taking so long lol

edit:
i think i need to add you as a coauthor. ill just go ahead and do that.

ill proofread your story .idk how ive never done this befoer after im less dizzy we can learn together. how do i read it ? zombies. ill play a woman and i liked dead man walking i havent read it in years/ how to read this sneek peak

Maybe you should learn how to write first. 

lmaoo

how do i delete this?

I don't think you can.

Ok, well I am in a different state of mind now and hopefully I can still help in some way

You can still help, here's the link to her story:

https://chooseyourstory.com/story/dead-signal-(a-zombie-survival-story)