Operation Pedestal

I liked it: there's a good amount of technical detail and you clearly have an interest in this and know what you are writing about. Details are a bit light outside of this though, particularly how the characters feels about things, even a few details about their physical situation (light-headed from high speed flights, sweating heavily from pressure etc) would flesh it out a bit. The branching was great though with a lot of meaningful choices and a few typos here and there but overall the experience matches up to what you described. Good work :)

Overall, I found this story rather interesting. It completely lacked any character development whatsoever, and there are a few typos peppered in here and there, but nothing too much. Thats about the extent of my complaints. There were plenty of choices and it gave you enough information to make smart decisions. All in all, it is a safe choice for someone looking for a quick, educational read, as long as you do not mind the lack of character depth.