PepsiCo Adventures

what the fuck

Meh, pretty funny but not really worth any time. Good, for you to poop on.

It had some typos.

I do like the writing of this story; the serious tone and pacing is paired quite well with the lolrandom nonsense, and it isn't filled to the fizzing brim with spelling and grammar mistakes (though not to say there are none).

Thankfully it's a very short game, otherwise I would've gone blind from rolling my eyes to the back of my skull. I know the point of the story is to be comically overwhelming, but at the end of the day, that's what it is - overwhelming. I'm sorry, I just can't really do the whole "lolrandom" genre to this extent... and this is a quite extreme example, albeit one of the better entries to the category on this site.

I'd love to see a more serious work come from the author though, this wasn't complete and utter dogshit to say the least so that's something.

Funnier than I expected but not much to it.

Dub

A single tear rolls down its face. "Please" it says "take this... and remember me for what I could have been". Its door opens, and it dies.

[...]

That is the lasting memory I will take from this epic. For how long? Perhaps until I, too, go to the realm beyond where no fridge knows what lay.

So, yeah, I was sure this was going to be a Pepsi advertisement. Instead, it was an absurdity that just kept getting more ridiculous. But in the end, I defeated the fridge uprising and savored my delicious Diet Coke (Of course, Diet Coke is ass, but hey, it's fiction. Suspension of disbelief).

In the genre of lolrandom games, this one is at least coherent, so that puts it a step above. But no one is going to be crying tears of sorrow, or feeling excitement or longing for this world. Such is the nature of this type of game.

In short: the game is handicapped by the fact that it's a toilet diversion with no real depth. But compared to other games of the same ilk, it is a step above.

So yeah, not bad.

It was dumb but it made me laugh. Getting my Diet Coke actually felt rewarding. 4/8

I don't understand... it has a lot of spelling mistakes, you need editing not vibes, sadly I cannot recomend this story

Funny enough to entertain for a few minutes. The battle scene sounds like an authentic send-up of superhero-comicbook-Godzilla-whoknowswhat type of genre and I loved it.
The very, very brief moments of 'deep feeling and insight' were well done, too. The dying moments. 'There will be many young fridges to raise...'