Player Comments on PepsiCo Adventures

what the fuck

Meh, pretty funny but not really worth any time. Good, for you to poop on.

It had some typos.

I do like the writing of this story; the serious tone and pacing is paired quite well with the lolrandom nonsense, and it isn't filled to the fizzing brim with spelling and grammar mistakes (though not to say there are none).

Thankfully it's a very short game, otherwise I would've gone blind from rolling my eyes to the back of my skull. I know the point of the story is to be comically overwhelming, but at the end of the day, that's what it is - overwhelming. I'm sorry, I just can't really do the whole "lolrandom" genre to this extent... and this is a quite extreme example, albeit one of the better entries to the category on this site.

I'd love to see a more serious work come from the author though, this wasn't complete and utter dogshit to say the least so that's something.

Funnier than I expected but not much to it.

Dub

A single tear rolls down its face. "Please" it says "take this... and remember me for what I could have been". Its door opens, and it dies.

[...]

That is the lasting memory I will take from this epic. For how long? Perhaps until I, too, go to the realm beyond where no fridge knows what lay.

So, yeah, I was sure this was going to be a Pepsi advertisement. Instead, it was an absurdity that just kept getting more ridiculous. But in the end, I defeated the fridge uprising and savored my delicious Diet Coke (Of course, Diet Coke is ass, but hey, it's fiction. Suspension of disbelief).

In the genre of lolrandom games, this one is at least coherent, so that puts it a step above. But no one is going to be crying tears of sorrow, or feeling excitement or longing for this world. Such is the nature of this type of game.

In short: the game is handicapped by the fact that it's a toilet diversion with no real depth. But compared to other games of the same ilk, it is a step above.

So yeah, not bad.

It was dumb but it made me laugh. Getting my Diet Coke actually felt rewarding. 4/8

I don't understand... it has a lot of spelling mistakes, you need editing not vibes, sadly I cannot recomend this story

Funny enough to entertain for a few minutes. The battle scene sounds like an authentic send-up of superhero-comicbook-Godzilla-whoknowswhat type of genre and I loved it.
The very, very brief moments of 'deep feeling and insight' were well done, too. The dying moments. 'There will be many young fridges to raise...'

This story captures my very essence and that of my cyborg dog assistant Mango. Thank you!

Just kind of a silly 5 minute diversion. It has its moments but there's not much substance so I can't rate it very high. The author should try again with a longer story.

Dogshit

Ok, weird name and description and it comes across as a bit of an advert 😊 It’s pretty lolrandom but the branching is good and it’s fairly imaginative. SPAG is mostly good but there are a few errors (at one point the fridge embraces Talk like a Pirate Day and asks “You believed me farce?”). It’s more original than most, the writing was strong for such a ridiculous scenario (which helped the comedy by taking it seriously) and all I can say is that I am glad I didn’t want a Pepsi Max.

The whole story reads a bit like a fun acid trip and though I don’t really like random stories this one was very creative and powerfully written, making it a bit better than most of the others in this genre. Like Fabrikant said it’s a good way to kill 5 minutes but as this writer shows promise it would be fun to see them tackle more ambitious projects, though I think the writer has a good knack for comedy. Not really sure if they’ll write another though as they seemed to have pinned their username to this story. 4/8

its written well

"All dreams have meanings"

My dreams:

OK, what just happened? The writing was decent and I had good 5 minutes. This is a really short game and I don't think the concept would have worked for much more than this. But the implementation is good, and the result is worth checking out.

This is the strangest Coca Cola ad I've seen.

It's alright. I didn't notice any SPAG errors, and the concept is done well. Personally not my cup of tea, but if you're into the kind of story with dream logic and lolrandom humour you'll probably enjoy this.

What the fuck did I just read.