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the story about DND

yesterday
Note: This will be edited, this is just thoughts for now.


We exit the cave, me and the rest of the party, while our Nobleman isnt looking, i pull out my dagger and stab him in the back. he tries to use Burning Hands on me, but i narrowly dodge it and start moving my dagger up his back, slicing through his head. the player playing him now has to do death saves for the next 3-5 turns.

the story about DND

yesterday

     I think the second comma could be a period, and there's practically no context. There's no idea of what we were doing before, what got this into this situation, or why we're attacking someone who seems to be an ally. There's also no explanation of what Burning Hands or death saves are, and I know what those are but there are people who won't.

     That's also not exactly how D&D works, if you're doing it from a player and not character perspective what are the turns? How much damage did the nobleman take (it going through the head likely means he rolled a critical)? What's the DM's style, there's flexibility in D&D and with different DMs there are things that can change. There's also massive differences from what edition you're playing with, and how recent a version you're using.

     And also there's house rules. Things the DM has decided, with or without the group, to apply or remove from the rules. To change, or edit.

the story about DND

yesterday
Burning Hands is a spell because most of us are spellcasters.

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yesterday

     I know what it is, I said that, I am just pointing out it could be confusing for people who don't know that. I'm a DM, I've played for years, I know what I'm talking about. Just as a suggestion, you could explain what it is in the paragraph or beforehand. Even saying cast instead of use would likely make more sense.

the story about DND

yesterday
We've been trying to kill the Nobleman for the past 3 meetings.

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yesterday

     Oh, so it's a story about your game? Like when Mizal told you something, to tell her about it or whatever? Or not a story at all.

the story about DND

yesterday
ye

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yesterday

...YE?! YE?!?!? What abomination is ye?! D:<

the story about DND

yesterday
me and some others's way of saying yes

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yesterday

I know, I was trying to be funny...

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yesterday
o

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yesterday

Hast thou never heard of ye olden times? Thine art a disgrace to thine family!

(Joking btw, just putting this here in case you don't realize)

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yesterday

I know, but that is not modern English! That stays in the history books.

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yesterday

Thou shalt bar thine own wonderous tongue of old behind the cruel, pale pages of history?

I would go on, but I don't know how to, lol

the story about DND

yesterday
*Thou art a disgrace to thine family.

the story about DND

yesterday
Thou shalt correct Fabrikant

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yesterday

*Thou art correct, Fabrikant

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yesterday
SO I WAS CORRECT

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yesterday

What? He's correcting you.

the story about DND

yesterday
art means is, dont it? shalt means dont

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yesterday

I don't know. And don't it is incorrect grammar.

the story about DND

24 hours ago
its how i speak

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24 hours ago
Shalt means shall not, so closest to "will not". Thou art means "you are". (The way it's used in the Lord's Prayer that's probably where most people are familiar with it is a little more grammatically complicated.) Take a lot at the article that Mystic linked though.

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Oh, nice! I know what I'm doing now!

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yesterday
Well now with all these replies she can't edit it.

the story about DND

24 hours ago
My main critism of this site: It's really not good as a notepad.

the story about DND

24 hours ago
I cant fix the story also because he chickened out today

the story about DND

yesterday
He wasnt here today