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7 years ago

Chapter 1: Empire State of Mind

 

The fire. The fire. It blazes bright in the cold winter night in New York. People crowd the streets, heading where they need to be. Heading where they want to be. Where people need them. The busy city was cold. Dead.

And the fire rages on.

No, not a real fire, a personfied fire. The fire of the hustle bustle of the machines that run the city. Of the people who are blindingly following orders and not taking a stand for themselves. This would make it a great target. To strike at the dead city. To make it lively. To save them of the power hungry monsters that run them. THe people doing whatever they normally did at 9 in the morning changed their routine forever, thanks to the GWA. The Global War Agency. A secretive terrorist organization whose military capabilities are scarcely known. Their plan? Take down the super powers of the world.

With fire.

They struck at the Empire State Building that morning. They paralyzed more than just the US. They stopped the World. With fire.

The building fell to the ground and killed over 1,000 innocent people. But would they start there? No, they wouldn't. They took down the Eiffel Tower two days later. Toppled it to the ground and killed 10,000 people. Would they stop there? No. Their fire would rage on until it was extinguished. They marched straight to the Kremlin. With small numbers, they killed at least 20,000 people with two planes. Who is next? The fire chooses a new target daily. They act out of strength. They have the world in their hands now. Will they stop?

The next day, the President is killed. Along with 2 cabinet members and the Secretary of Defense. The US is outraged, and they demand war. They declared war against the GWA, but not knowing the size of their military they underestimated them. They took out 100 government officials in the next three days. The allied countries realized too late that size did not matter at all, and in fact, the smaller army is the more advanced. They could strike without little boomerang effect.

The fire.

Chapter Two: Enactment

Two days after the death of 12 congressional members, the US made a major move. They met with all allied countries' officials to discuss a treaty. They emerged the idea of a strike force of men and women who had proven their worth on the battlefield countless times. They took chosen individuals hand-picked to fight against this terrorist threat. Supplied with all country's resources, they had infinite possibilities. Backed by the public, the group was known as The Fallen. They are also called 'Ghosts' or 'Wraiths'. But the US abused this power. Using most of the US's troops, they sent the troops at other friendly countries for espionage. Suspecting that the GWA was a part of the countries wanting to take down the US. They screwed up, and the countries are back at war. With the GWA on the loose, the United States mended certain broken fields and reimbursed the program, but with a price. To prove that the countries weren't the GWA each and every one stated that the US must successfully run The Fallen program and keep it supplied, along with preventing major attacks AND take down the GWA. If they don't the US faces extinction from war, and the countries will level the entire plane.

So, the US must run every single member enrolled in the Fallen, including the foreign agents. The US has control of the elite group, and they must use it for good.

Chapter 3: The First Strike

 

Its been a year since the US sent troops from the Fallen into foreign country's lands, and the GWA has gone silent for the most part. Other than a few killings and murderings associated with it, nothing big has happened, and the countries are scared more of the silence than the noise.

 

The US sent individuals from The Fallen to secure intelligence on a carrier believed to supply the GWA with weapons and supplies. Their mission is to secure the cargo and possibly learn of porting locations. They must take down all crew members without a single noise or alarm, otherwise the GWA will learn of the Fallen and attack. This is your mission.

Chapter 1: Empire State of Mind

 

The fire. The fire. It blazes bright in the cold winter night in New York. People crowd the streets, heading where they need to be. Heading where they want to be. Where people need them. The busy city was cold. Dead.

And the fire rages on.

No, not a real fire, a personfied fire. The fire of the hustle bustle of the machines that run the city. Of the people who are blindingly following orders and not taking a stand for themselves. This would make it a great target. To strike at the dead city. To make it lively. To save them of the power hungry monsters that run them. THe people doing whatever they normally did at 9 in the morning changed their routine forever, thanks to the GWA. The Global War Agency. A secretive terrorist organization whose military capabilities are scarcely known. Their plan? Take down the super powers of the world.

With fire.

They struck at the Empire State Building that morning. They paralyzed more than just the US. They stopped the World. With fire.

The building fell to the ground and killed over 1,000 innocent people. But would they start there? No, they wouldn't. They took down the Eiffel Tower two days later. Toppled it to the ground and killed 10,000 people. Would they stop there? No. Their fire would rage on until it was extinguished. They marched straight to the Kremlin. With small numbers, they killed at least 20,000 people with two planes. Who is next? The fire chooses a new target daily. They act out of strength. They have the world in their hands now. Will they stop?

The next day, the President is killed. Along with 2 cabinet members and the Secretary of Defense. The US is outraged, and they demand war. They declared war against the GWA, but not knowing the size of their military they underestimated them. They took out 100 government officials in the next three days. The allied countries realized too late that size did not matter at all, and in fact, the smaller army is the more advanced. They could strike without little boomerang effect.

The fire.

Chapter Two: Enactment

Two days after the death of 12 congressional members, the US made a major move. They met with all allied countries' officials to discuss a treaty. They emerged the idea of a strike force of men and women who had proven their worth on the battlefield countless times. They took chosen individuals hand-picked to fight against this terrorist threat. Supplied with all country's resources, they had infinite possibilities. Backed by the public, the group was known as The Fallen. They are also called 'Ghosts' or 'Wraiths'. But the US abused this power. Using most of the US's troops, they sent the troops at other friendly countries for espionage. Suspecting that the GWA was a part of the countries wanting to take down the US. They screwed up, and the countries are back at war. With the GWA on the loose, the United States mended certain broken fields and reimbursed the program, but with a price. To prove that the countries weren't the GWA each and every one stated that the US must successfully run The Fallen program and keep it supplied, along with preventing major attacks AND take down the GWA. If they don't the US faces extinction from war, and the countries will level the entire plane.

So, the US must run every single member enrolled in the Fallen, including the foreign agents. The US has control of the elite group, and they must use it for good.

Chapter 3: The First Strike

 

Its been a year since the US sent troops from the Fallen into foreign country's lands, and the GWA has gone silent for the most part. Other than a few killings and murderings associated with it, nothing big has happened, and the countries are scared more of the silence than the noise.

 

The US sent individuals from The Fallen to secure intelligence on a carrier believed to supply the GWA with weapons and supplies. Their mission is to secure the cargo and possibly learn of porting locations. They must take down all crew members without a single noise or alarm, otherwise the GWA will learn of the Fallen and attack. This is your mission.

Modern Destruction: Act 1 Interest Thread

7 years ago

I'm surprised that the thread didn't burn down with all of the fire that was involved.

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7 years ago

Lot of fire xD

Anyways, I think this was supposed to be posted in Writing Workshop as I assume you're asking for interest in the unfinished storygame you have titled "Modern Destruction".

Modern Destruction: Act 1 Interest Thread

7 years ago

@Endmaster @Killa_Robot @BerkaZerka

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7 years ago

Yeah sorry I've been inactive on this site for about 2 years now. Lotsa stuff has changed between then. 

Modern Destruction: Act 1 Interest Thread

7 years ago

Don't worry about it :)

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7 years ago
Chapter 1: Empire State of Fire



The fire. The fire. It fires bright in the fire in Fire. Fire fires the fires, firing where they need to fire. Firing where they want to fire. Where fire fires them. The fire was fire. Fire.

And the fire rages on.

No, not a real fire, a personfied fire. The fire of the fire of the fire that run the fire. Of the fire who are firingly firing fires and not firing a fire for fire. This would make it a great fire. To strike at the dead fire. To make it fire. To fire them of the fire fires that fire them. THe fire doing whatever they normally did at 9 in the morning changed their fire forever, thanks to the fire. The Global Fire Agency. A secretive fire organization whose fire capabilities are scarcely known. Their fire? Fire down the super fires of the world.

With fire.

They fired at the Fire that morning. They fired more than just the Fire. They stopped the Fire. With fire.

The fire fired to the ground and fired over 1,000 innocent fires. But would they fire there? No, they wouldn't. They fired down the Fire two fires later. Fired it to the fire and fired 10,000 fires. Would they fire there? No. Their fire would fire on until it was fire. They fired straight to the Fire. With small fires, they fired at least 20,000 fire with two fires. Who is next? The fire chooses a new fire daily. They fire out of fire. They have the fire in their fire now. Will they stop?

The next fire, the Fire is fired. Along with 2 fires and the Fire of Fire. The fire is fired, and they demand fire. They declared fire against the FIR, but not firing the fire of their fire they fired them. They took out 100 fires in the next three fires. The allied fires realized too late that fire did not matter at all, and in fact, the smaller fire is the more fired. They could fire without little fire effect.

The fire.

Chapter Two: Fire

Two fires after the fire of 12 congressional fires, the FI made a major fire. They fired with all allied fires to discuss a fire. They emerged the fire of a fire of fire and fire who had proven their fire on the fire countless fires. They took chosen fires hand-fired to fire against this terrorist fire. Fired with all country's fires, they had infinite fires. Backed by the fire, the fire was known as The Fire. They are also fired 'Fires' or 'Fires'. But the FI Fired this fire. Firing most of the FI's fires, they fire the fires at other friendly fire for fire. Firing that the FIR was a part of the fires firing to fire down the FI. They fired up, and the fires are back at fire. With the FIR on the fire, the Fire Fired certain broken fires and fired the fire, but with a fire. To fire that the fires weren't the FIR each and every fire Fired that the FI must successfully fire The Fire fire and keep it fired, along with firing major fires AND fire down the FIR. If they don't the FI faces fire from fire, and the fires will level the entire fire.

So, the FI must fire every single fire fired in the Fired, firing the foreign fires. The FI has fire of the elite fire, and they must fire it for fire.

Chapter 3: The First Fire



Its been a fire since the FI sent fires from the Fire into foreign fire's fires, and the FIR has gone fire for the most fire. Other than a few fires and firings fired with it, nothing fire has fired, and the fires are fired more of the fire than the fire.



The FI sent fires from The Fire to secure fire on a fire fired to supply the FIR with fires and fires. Their fire is to fire the fire and possibly fire of firing fires. They must fire down all fires without a single fire or fire, otherwise the FIR will learn of the Fire and fire. This is your fire.

Modern Destruction: Act 1 Interest Thread

7 years ago

You forgot all the bolding, Banner :(

This was gorgeous. XD

Modern Destruction: Act 1 Interest Thread

7 years ago
The fire burned down all the bolding.

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7 years ago

How sad :c

What a destructive fire.

Modern Destruction: Act 1 Interest Thread

7 years ago

You guys crack me up

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7 years ago

This post makes me happy.

Modern Destruction: Act 1 Interest Thread

7 years ago

This story's mad fire, yo.

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7 years ago

...Fire...

What is this for, again? All I got was...

...Fire...

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7 years ago
So water elementals take out the world. Alrighty then.