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Hi. Everyone who read my first ever story-game Jack and Jill Live On knows that it sucked. However, I have written the second part to the series, which is longer and hopefully better. 

So please read it and comment! :)

well.... it was... meh...

Post these kind of threads in the parlor room next time. The Mods will move it there soon though, so no need of reposting the thread. :)

It was written OK, but just too dang short.

I suggest copying and pasting the whole thing into your new game and plugging it in at the start, then deleting the old one - and also adding at least 10 times the content to your next one...

We really rate shorty short short stories poorly around here...

short translation:

Don't do episodic story games, just publish it as one whole thing, or at least release each part and then a complete version afterwards.

Thanks for all your comments!

Moved to Parlor Room.

Where is the sequel anyways