So, i just finished my VERY short storygame called perspectives and I can't publish it because it isn't old enough. Since I'm bored, I'm going to put it up here for playtesting.
http://chooseyourstory.com/story/perspectives
Actually, forget it, I can publish it already
You haven't been working on it for 45 minutes. Unpublish it and make something with more meat to it.
I left a comment :)
I changed the title to 'Positive or Negative', changed the game to advanced, created 3 endings and edited it. Please try it out(again) and re-rate it. I would really appreciate it.