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EarthCollision

Cliff Richardson: Ruby Ruckus (Preview)

11 years ago

Wanna sneak peak at my upcoming treasure-hunter game?

There is only one page done but still, tell me what you think.

Read it here: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/cliff-richardson~3a-ruby-ruckus

Ford

Cliff Richardson: Ruby Ruckus (Preview)

11 years ago

No proper opinions can be given on a story that is one page long. You should make a story at least a little bit functional and a decent length before asking for actual opinions, that is if you actually want opinions.

EarthCollision

Cliff Richardson: Ruby Ruckus (Preview)

11 years ago

Okay.

ADDED 3 NEW PAGES TO THE STORY.