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Well it's about a prince that loses his entire kingdom and family to people that can assume the exact appearance of those they kill , it's pretty sad and tragic in the beginning, but picks up later when he retakes his destiny, so what you think about that?

Here's a end choice early on,

You realize no one has the silky smooth voice of your mother, or the commanding deep voice of your father, so you come into their embrace. Your mother convinces you that you are having a nightmare even when you're 18. She leads you back to bed and tucks you in, singing a gentle bedtime song. Then you embrace the grace of beauty of sleep quickly. THEN YOU GET STABBED IN THE BACK. THE END

This happened to King Solomon when some chicken-footed shade took his place and kicked his ass out of the kingdom. Something like that, anyways.

STOP PLAGIARIZING THE BIBLE

I was gonna make some really offensive joke, but I realized that I was gonna stir up a religious argument, so I stopped myself there

Congrats.

Seriously though, people get nightmares all throughout most of their lives, so...

Video games already did that. One of the spy's knives makes you disguise as whoever you kill. STOP PLAIGIARIZING THE TEAM FORTRESS TWO!

Use the Spycicle you fucking pleb.

I can't, I spent all my money on an awesome watch that makes it look like you die when you turn invisible so that nobody ever suspects a thing!

You know you get that from an achievement.



Right?



It's also shitty.

Oh I like to activate the invis by taking fall damage :D

Make it so that way the new rulers of the kingdom really screw things up, but not in the traditional monarchist way. Have them do things like appoint a horse for Senator and rename the knights funny names that have horrible puns in them like "Sir Cumnavigate" and "Sir Valence" and "Sir Ching." Then have them name the royal cat as heir to the throne and insist the cat marry Senator horse. Then they should insist on renaming absolutely everyday on the calendar Tuesday, so that way they may celebrate the cat's birthday everyday.