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Preview for Avenger

11 years ago

You turn suddenly and thrust the lightning bolt into Superman. The lightning makes him release his grip on you and send him flying (you add more power to it). Clouds begin to form at your feet as you press the attack on Superman throwing bolts after bolts at him never giving him the chance to recover. When on bolt misses he soars towards and in a flash and knocks you down into the building sending you through to floors.

You get up and wipe the blood from your mouth.

"You wanna dance fucker let FUCKING DANCE!" You yell as you begin radiating a large amout of power. The energy radiation causes it to make an aura  and it takes on a red jagged, fierce flame-like appearance around you. Black lightning also bounce across your body.

 You fly through your hole and face Superman. You speed toward Superman and deliver a thunderous blow to his face. Damn it feels like your punching steel but you ignore it as you quickly get Superman into a headlock. You then begin to fall back towards the earth using your power to pick up more speed as you move from his head to his waist and wrap your legs around his upper torso and begin to spin. The Earth reaches up to meet and

Booom!!!

 The shockwave from the Falcon Drop set off car alarms, shatter windows, utterly destroy the road, and damages buildings and people from minor to sever. In the crater you created you release Superman and backflip away from him waiting for him to move.

Without noticing it new helicopter begin gathering at what seems to be a safe distance for them. You begin to malk over to the crater. Only See a fist emerge and sends you flying into the sky. Soon he there with you and grabs you by your neck and sends you down to the Earth with authority. You crash unto a car you body is hurting and your head is ringing. You roll off as Superman lands in front of you. You smile at him through your mask.

"Your good." You grunt out. "But i'm better." You form your hand into a gun and fire a bolt of electricity which he swats away and knees you in the chin. 

"Okay that didn't work." You muttered as jump into the air flying high into the sky with Superman hot on your trail you begin to form thunderclouds and....

It a small peice so is anyone interested in reading it when i'm done. Also point out grammar mistakes in the preivew.

Preview for Avenger

11 years ago
Mother of god. Chills of excitement went down my spine just from reading the preview.

Preview for Avenger

11 years ago

Tahnks

Preview for Avenger

11 years ago

The lightning makes him release his grip on you and sends him flying.

Clouds begin to form at your feet as you press your attack on Superman, throwing bolt after bolt . When one bolt misses, he soars toward you and in a flash, he knocks you down into the building, sending you through two floors.

"You wanna dance, fucker? Let's FUCKING DANCE!" You yell, as you begin radiating a large amount of power. (Remember to press enter before and after somebody says something.)

The energy radiation causes it to make an aura,

Black lightning also bounces across your body.

Preview for Avenger

11 years ago

Thanls

Preview for Avenger

11 years ago

I feel no excitement if I have no reason to be fighting the Man of Steel without getting plausibly angry.

Preview for Avenger

11 years ago

Thajs for the feed back