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I'm not going to discuss it really, I just want to be vague as hell and put it out there. I was wondering if you guys would like to blindly give me suggestions for things that could make it more fun. BTW it takes place in a mansion.

*takes this vague thing and tosses it on the floor*

Go nuts. If you can, conceal any command/story suggestions so that others can't see it. If you want others to see it so you can discuss it, that's cool too. I'm just saying mystery/surprise makes it more fun in my opinion. I dunno. Thanks.

Take it however you like and run with it. I'll do my best to incorporate as many suggestions as I can (I'd love to take anything you guys give me really) and your suggestions may show up early or later in the story depending on my preference. I've already started writing.

@Fleshnblood_78 had a wacky story about leprechauns. Fluffkins or something. Was really bizarre.

Fluffkins The Bipolar Leprechaun was my story lol it was TERRIBLE. I wrote it one night when I was homebound and bored out of my mind. Anyone can write a better story than mine. 

nate

I thought it was hilarious, I dunno.

It does sound funny. :)

To give you a general idea about my story (I said I wouldn't discuss it but I feel like it's appropriate to give you a base knowledge if you feel like suggesting anything) the story is about a leprechaun who goes on a quirky little adventure with his boyfriend to get to something he's late for but he doesn't remember where he's supposed to be or why he's late. The story involves time travel and pranks, and leprechaun shenanigans.

give me 2 minutes Spades and I will republish my story. You can find it under my profile. It's not completed and absolutely bad, IMO But thanks for the kind words Tans. 

nate

Awesome :D

*Really? Cool. LOL you totally posted at the same time as me.

Anyway, feel free to give me any feed back and whatever you think you'd like to see on the story.

I looked at the sneak preview. It's not bad.