I need someone to play through my story so far (about 20 000 words) because I am so bad at keeping projects alive and I need to know if this would be boring or would make a good full-length story. Help is greatly appreciated :)
Oooh! Oooh! Pick me! Pick me! *raises hand*
Did you create it on the site yet? I don't see a new story created even on your points list
It's one I've had on the site for a while, but have only just started to get my shit together on and start writing. (Bathybic)
I don't think the sentence "Seemingly pleading them." works.
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