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From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

Like the title says, you will give me a random sentence and how you wish it to be (a romantic story, an action story, an sci-fi story, etc) and I'll try to develop it. This is so that I can both excersize my writing skills and test the boundaries of my imaginations.

Write the sentence away!

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

Once upon a time, a brave young capybara fought a dragon using only magic, a bottle-opener and his wits. 

Fantasy-action. 

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

(... ok!)

Once upon a time, a brave young capybara fought a dragon using only magic, a bottle-opener and his wits. How he ended up to even fight a dragon, only the great god Capy knows, he truly works in mysterious ways. All this brave young capybara remembered is that he was fighting some WC mutants with all of his friends and now he was here, only with his magic, a bottle opener and his smarts to help him in the fight with this green behemoth.

The Dragon roars loudly and starts to roar loudly and shoots a continuous flame, expecting to burn the Brave fast and eat him for lunch. This dragon clearly did not hear of this Brave, he had slain creatures bigger and stronger than a measly dragon. The Brave formed a magic shield and put a dummy instead of him as he teleported away from inside the shield and right on the head of the dragon, who started to shake it's head wildly.

This does not affect The Brave at all, he bites into the head of the dragon, who roars in pain and summons a bottle of Death's Embrace, a very poisonous drink that could kill a hundred dragons. He opened the bottle with his trusty bottle-opener and did the craziest thing, he jumped into the dragon's mouth with the bottle open and starts to pour the drink right into the dragon's throat, who started to violently shake as he spat the Brave out.

The dragon's eyes start to turn black and it's scales to turn a pale white before starting to decompose at an amazingly fast rate, after only ten seconds, only a massive skeleton remaining in it's place. The Brave grinned and started to walk away from the skeleton, however more dragons fly in and surround him.

The Brave grins, they are no match for him. The dragons start to spit out flames towards him, however, he simply super jumps up, a massive energy sphere forming in his hands and just before throwing it he shouts.

"You are no match for, Malkalack the Great!" he says then throws the sphere down which explodes and blows away the dragons like they were feathers in the wind. After the shot he simply lands in the center of the crater with a wide grin. "You are no match for a capybara, lizards!" he says then begins to walk off slowly with the massive crater and dragon carcasses being behind him.

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

*sniff*

It's... beautiful. 

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

I'm glad you liked it! If you want anything else, feel free to request it!

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

The seemingly old haggard lady limped about the city's streets at night; a beautiful young girl was inside, just waiting to be rescued.

Fantasy, of fucking course.

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

The seemingly old haggard lady limped about the city's streets at night; a beautiful young girl was inside, just waiting to be rescued. Grandmother and niece, had been torn apart by the streets of the vile City, it took a lot to survive in here, however the old woman was not any regular woman, she had been once the bane of the world, tearing cities apart with her magic, killing all those who opposed her at her will no matter if they were elf, orc or human, however those times had long passed and she now had lived a peaceful life with her niece.

Untill some idiot bandits thought it was a good idea to kidnap the young girl from her own refuge and into their's hoping to get some sort of hefty ransom for her, if not... well then she was beautiful, there's more ways to use a body than just ransom.

"Where's the ransom?!" a massive orc asked the beautiful girl who was scared beyond talking, the orc wanted to hit her with his hand, however a young elf dressed in leather armor says.

"Grat, we will get less money if she is damaged." the elf says in a indiferent tone, his hair was white and his eyes were blood red, his figure was slender, built for agility. This was a Blood Elf.

The orc, looks angrily at the girl then at the elf and says.

"If this doesn't bring us money in one hour, I'm using her, then I'll let the rest use her and then I'll kill her!" the orc said enraged.

However a barely audible knock was heard on the door. Grat moves towards the door angrily, where a old woman was, she was almost blind and had a limp, she seemed to be barely able to walk around.

"Get the fuck out of here, you old wench!" the orc roars.

"Now that's not a way to talk to your elders, young orc, I'll have to teach you manners." she said raising her hand slowly towards the orc.

Grat wanted to hit her, however he started to feel incredible pain his chest, then, breaking out of his chest was his own heart, he looked for a few moment at his still beating heart, then fell on his knees, then on the floor and died. The few other bandits attacked the old woman however, they froze into place as out of the woman began to emanate a massive amount of power.

They could feel their own weapons slipping from their hands and float away, only a second later, the same weapons decapitated them. The elf looked at the woman with a wide smile and hits the girl lightly in the head to knock her unconciouss.

?Then, the elf seemingly dissapears only to appear behind the old woman to stab her in the back. As the sword plunged through the old woman, her head turned to face the elf with a wide grin and says.

"Evomo!" and one second later, the body of the elf explodes in a mess of blood and organs.

The old woman picks up the girl and starts to walk back to their own small house. One hour later, the young girl wakes up and rubs her head, and sees her grandmother, covered in blood. She asks:

"Grandmother what happened?!" she asks, clearly still scared and confused.

"Oh, those young gentlemen, simply listened to me and handed you over." she answers with a smile as she hugs her niece. "Don't worry."

"But!"

"Do not worry!" the grandmother said. The young girl, simply accepts the fact and hugs her grandmother back, however, the face of the grandmother distorts, with large sharp teeth starting to grow out of her mouth, her eyes, starting to turn sickening yellow. "Granny is going to take very good care of you!"

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

@Swiftstryker

Do you like it?

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

*moves in to attack the old lady.

And...I could write an entire story from this short story.  xD

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

And I believe you! *obvious sarcasm is obvious!*

Then by all means, do!

 

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

The black wolf managed to stand on his hind legs, and he decided that this suddenly-learned skill could help him kill that moron named Deathwish.

Fantasy-action.

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

The black wolf managed to stand on his hind legs, and he decided that this suddenly-learned skill could help him kill that moron named Deathwish. Finally, now he could kill the moron, that was named for what he asked for, by bragging like a idiot, that he killed an orc, that he managed to convince human foresters to stop cutting down the trees, that HE was better than him! He decides to stay on all his fours for now, to surprise Deathwish!

As soon as he gets near to him, he sees two young wolves looking at him with admiration as he told on stories about his so called greatness. The black wolf approached him silently, then as he got close enough, he said:

"Stop talking like a idiot and fight me, Deathwish!" the black wolf roared.

Deathwish simply looked at him with disdain then looked away, with one of the two answering in his stead.

"You're not worthy of fighting him, weakling, he's a the hero of our kind, you're a nothing!" one of them said growling, however, as soon as he said that, the black wolf charged him and bit him by his neck, snapping it.

The other one, shocked, charged at the black wolf to kill him, however just jumps a bit to the side and bites him by the tail and using all of his force to throw him in a tree, killing him. All of this time, he simply looked shocked at the black wolf not even being able to move.

"Fight me!" the black wolf shouts waiting for Deathwish to move, however, he doesn't even budge or even wink, the black wolf roars angrily and says:

"Then die like them!" he says raising on his hind paws and falls down front first slashing Deathwish across the face, not killing him, but wounding him badly. The black wolf approached with a wide grin and bit the neck of the wounded wolf.

"You... your brothers... son." he managed to say before his life left him.

The black wolf looked at what he did and starts howling, filled with pride. Soon the whole forest started to resonate with howls... with the Blood's howl being the loudest and the proudest!

Sorry... it'a bit short!

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

Still a better story than Twilight.

That's a really cool story!

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

Thanks, I have an english exam soon, so what better way to practice it, then here!

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

The man staggered to his feet with a goat head in one hand and lubricant in the other.

Romance

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

@iqqih 

@Delta44 read it untill it's ending, you're gonna get shocked!

The man staggered to his feet with a goat head in one hand and lubricant in the other. Well, this girl is a little crazy, kissing him... in the forest, then knocking him out and leaving him a goat head and lubricant, did this mean yes? Did it mean no? Ah, who cares, he kissed his crush and he was happy.

Luckily, the cabin that they were in was very close, she was probably there sitting on the couch and reading as she usually does, with her reading glasses on and her hair tied in a pony-tail. She was not only a sight to behold at(in more ways than one.), but she was the smartest girl in the class, also being probably the nicest one too.

He entered through the door, there, on one couch was, Kia, sitting on the couch, with her reading glasses on, reading some sort of philosophical book about freedom and stuff. On the opposite side of the room, was Daniel giggling, talking to someone, complimenting, saying sweet nothings and even blowing air kisses through the phone, talking to his girlfriend no doubt!

"Now this is love!" he thought smiling as he saw Daniel talking to his girlfriend, however when he turned his look back towards Kia, he could see that her hands were shaking and that her eyes were moist... she was crying. "But why?" he thought, the only thing being there was Daniel air-kissing the phone, the book couldn't have been sad, it was philosophical book for crying out loud.

He approached and sat right next to her and smiling and asked her in quiet tone, so that the other couldn't hear him:

"What's wrong, is this book so bad?" he asks in a joking tone.

She looked even sadder and simply threw a glance at the two and pretended to get back to reading, she was still shaking, now even more than before. He was confused, why was she shaking and even crying, why did she even glance at Daniel... then it suddenly hit him...

However, before saying anything, she dropped the book and kissed him. He was taken by surprise, he didn't oppose it, of course not, it was his dream come true, then again, before he could react, she grabbed him by the hand and took him upstairs into her room.

She put him on the bed and sat on his lap, starting to kiss him again, wildly and removing her shirt, leaving her only in a tank top. He barely had any time to breathe as she was kissing him like it was twomorrow was the end of the world, then he remembered what he was thinking before she "assaulted" him like this.

He removed her from his lips, when he saw her, he looked a bit shocked, her face was red as a tomato and rivers of tears were coming out of her eyes. After a few seconds he asked:

"Why are you doing this?" he asks, in a worried tone.

"Beacuse..." she said pausing. "...I love you!" she answered.

"Then why are you crying?" he asks her, in the same worried tone

"Beacuse it took you so long to realize that!" she answered, seemingly outraged.

"No you aren't if really loved me, then you would have done this when I first confessed to you!" he says, leaving her silent. "You are in love with Daniel, not me!" he said a bit angered.

She bit her lip and said between sobs:

"I'm... sorry." she said descending into a crying fit.

Calming down, and forgiving her, he takes her by the hand and takes her out of the room. She didn't oppose it, she was just shocked a bit by his actions and not accepting her... proposal. Daniel meanwhile arrived in front of Daniel, promptly took his phone, said:

"Daniel's not together with you anymore, bye, bye!" he said and smashed the phone on the floor.

"What the fuck, dude, she's going to kill me!" he said, but as Daniel continued, he stopped him.

"Shut up and answer me these two questions!" he ordered him, Daniel, quite surprised shut up and sat back down on the couch.

"Is Kia beautiful?!" he asked Daniel, in a authoritarian tone.

"Of course she is!" Daniel said, as if his friend had asked one of the most stupid questions.

"Then why the fuck are you chasing skirts, when you got her, loving you with her entire heart, keeping herself for you, while you run around chasing any other girl from school?!" he asked outraged. This time, Daniel only got up and went right in front of her, admiring Kia, however not doing anything else.

Irritated he pushed both of their heads closer so that their lips would touch and they would finally kiss. And they do, only three seconds after starting to kiss, then Daniel, grabbing her by the hand started to take her into his room, however, just before they got in, she managed to mouth a "thank you" to him, who only nodded in respons.

Then crashing on the couch he said to himself:

"Man, love's a real bitch with me isn't it..." he says, the sighs. "You know what?" he asks himself. "I know what I'm going to do, I'm going to gather a harem of girls, that way, one's bound to truly love me!" he says as he reached this realization. "Watch out ladies, Ken Blackwell's coming for ya!"

THE END! For now...

Sorry if it isn't that good, I'm not very good at romance... :P

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

Considering how shit the sentence and scenario I gave you is, the story was pretty good, well done!
 

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

Thanks! Feel free to write another one and I'll try to get to it as soon as I can!

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

Edit: Damn... I double posted. Shame on me!

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

I lost my lighter and I can't find it! Help!

Suspense

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

She turned around to the door, which had been opened, to see the monstrosity.

Horror

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

@playa988

@Wolfmist

I'm going to write your stories in twomorrow as I'm way too tired for this right now, sorry, mates!

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

Damn, this is a good idea.

From Sentence to Story

10 years ago

I know, right?!

Sorry, to the people who wanted a story, I have been busy today(even if it showed I was online :P). I'll try to write them twomorrow!