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A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

For those who do not know, Wolf Heart was the first storygame I have ever created on the site, currently unpublished.

I feel very stuck on its creation, to the point where I legitimately cannot write anymore on the story.

One day, it dawned on me: A new Wolf Heart, with some major updates, including the removal of the male/female links, more RPG-style content, and much more. Hell, even a multiplayer version of the game... Please note that it won't actually be a multiplayer game

So, what do you all think? New Wolf Heart? Vote here.

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

How the hell can you make a multi-player version?

TBH, I kind of want you to not too make it; wolf sims just might end up as the new WC. Or, alternatively, you could make something similar but with a human perspective. Allow me to elaborate; the player is a normal person in the modern day who was on a plane, but the plane crashes and they're stranded on a remote island. They wander around a bit, and eventually they befriend a tribe that has been cut off from civilization for years. Then, the player learns about the other tribes, etc. Essentially, just make it the same game with the same plot and stuff, but with humans instead of wolves.

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

If you've read the tiny text, the multiplayer game just appears to be multiplayer- it in no way is an actual multiplayer game.

On the whole "plane crashes onto an island" thing, you basically just described one of my first storygames, Stranded and Alone. I've actually deleted it, so I don't think it's quite a topic.

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

Ah, never mind.

Well, did you consider my idea?

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

I don't understand how you can associate a wolf's life with a human's, like you suggested.

"Same plot"

So... Humans that are licked so that they can piss later on? Humans that live out in the wild? Humans that have two layers of fur?

It really doesn't make sense at all.

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

Oh, for fuck's sake, remove all the fucking wolf shit! And, like I said, it's a remote island, and these people have been cut off from civilization for years.

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

I already told you, it's been done by me months ago. I dumped the idea, looking for something better than a text-based Forest clone!

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

Not a Forest clone, dumbass! No horror mechanics or anything like that! I'm talking about basically doing Wolf Heart, with a human protagonist instead of a wolf one, on an island with human tribes instead of wolf packs; how is that not going through your thick fucking skull?

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

*slowly facepalms* I. Already. Did. That. Shit.

What the fuck do you not understand?

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

It's not the same as your fucking other story! For fuck's sake, I'll just make a story and show you what the fuck I mean!

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

Chris, how would you know what Stranded and Alone was like? You didn't write or coauthor that story. You never played it. So what makes you say it isn't like the game?

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

*Facepalm* Because Derpino said it was like The Forest, which, mind you, was a survival-horror game. I'm talking about an adventure game with bits and pieces of survival mechanics.

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

I've just PMed Derp(ino?), and he said that it was more tribes than horror. So... It was exactly like what you suggested.

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

*Sigh* Well, never mind. I'm still going to write that story though, I'm way too far in to stop.

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

I, for one, would love a text-based wolf RPG with different stats.

A New Wolf Heart?

10 years ago

*gasp* You're tracking us!