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Organization and Progress

9 years ago

So this is more for myself but if anyone has any questions/input/comments on the story I'd be glad to listen and/or answer. Other than that this is to track my progress on my story Subjectivism now that I've finished the prologue and things will be getting slightly more complex with my writing.

Subjectivism:

A science-fiction adventure about an intergalactic diplomatic organization commonly known as the League of Stars (the futuristic League of Nations, essentially). The player plays as an Angel, a revived soldier under the Cynosure branch of the League, and due to their post-corpse status they don't require the common functions of a normal, living human (i.e. needing to breathe oxygen, eat, sleep, survive in only a certain range of temperatures), things that would make other planets uninhabitable to a living person. They must fluidly serve as a diplomat on missions of peace, and a soldier on missions of war. The main mission is to achieve peaceful relations with other planets and their leaders, but of course the player doesn't have to follow this. They can affect the relations between the planets and the League in several ways, such as bringing peace... or starting an intergalactic war. What they think is right is subjective.

Current Progress:

Prologue: Complete.

Max Statistics:

Charm - 35/50

Tough - 25/50

Clever - 20/50

Chapter One: In Progress

Max Statistics:

Charm - 40/50

Tough - 30/50

Clever - 25/50

 

Organization and Progress

9 years ago

Chapter One Checklist:

- Wake Up (6/10)

- Meet Lana and Nova

- Exposition time! Pt 1

- First (Side) Mission

         - Exposition time! Pt 2

         - Meet Kehra

- First (Side) Mission Complete (Pass/Fail)

- First (Main)Mission

        - First Planet

        - Meet Ilani

        - Second (Side) Mission

        - Second (Side) Mission End

- First (Main) Mission End

- Back to the Ship (NTS: come up with name for ship)

- Chapter One End

Max Statistics: (increased due to the fact that gaining is actually rather easy depending on the choices you may make)

Charm - 60/100

Tough - 45/100

Clever - 55/100

Least Amount of Health Possible:

93/100