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So, I am making this story called judge and Jury episode 1. So far me, and @MasonJarGuzzi, have gotten pretty far on it. I expect to publish the story in about 2-4 more months. But, here is the rundown of what I got so far.


Judge and Jury Episode 1:
You are one of 12 members of the jury. Now, most people do not know how a courtroom actually works, so I simplified it for anyone who reads the storygame.

On each page you will be able to look at the evidence you are given. The reader will have to decide whether the evidence matches up with what is being said in the text. At the end of the story or at anytime, you will be able to decide whether the defendant is guilty or not. Then you will get one of two endings, Good or bad respectively.
On every case I make, you will hear the Plaintiff first, defendant second, and witness statement 3rd. I will encourage the reader to use the go back button a lot because this game series will take a lot of thinking.

But that is how my game will play out.

Who did what flam Jam?

?

I don't understand why we should wait so long, we practically have wrote 3/4 of it.

No, because we still don't know if it is going to be longer or not.

Okay.......

Why is it now called pure sadness?

I don't know.

Come on Mason, im being serious.

I don't know.

Ah, I feel like I'm watching a sad, old couple.

XD

Pretty much.

FINISH IT!

Sounds like it could be interesting. I won't give input on how to lay it out since you already made so much, but if it works there is no reason not to keep going!

It sounds like you made a good deal of it already, so...

Go Jimmy Go!

Hey, I'm helping!

You know what? I'm tired. I'm just going to go read some of  End's porn.

 

Yeah well you got plenty of Go's from me for your own story.

SO
Go Jimmy Go!