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so i made this romance story and i need someone to help me with it. But how do you get coleaders so they can edit your story and is anyone willing to help?

This belongs in the writing workshop, not newbie central. 

isn't this the writing workshop

It wasn't, and that was the problem.

oh did you move it here or something

Yes, but please pay attention to where you post threads in the future.

okay i will

I'd be willing to help.

Just enter edit mode on your story and go to Game Options. From there, near the bottom and right under Difficulty Level, there should be a button that says [edit co-authors]. Just press that and put in my username and I'll be listed as a co-author and be able to look over your story and whatnot.

Had a quick look at what you have so far. Are you really going to write three separate stories with different main characters and different love interests dependent on what name the player picks? I wasn't expecting to see a major branch point there, though there's nothing wrong with that. Though keep in mind you're taking on three times as much work.

Are all three paths going to involve the boy being a ghost? If so I guess my concern is that readers might want something different after the first time.

no, three different mythical creatures

I say you are doing a good job so far, looks a bit short right now, but you are probably going to make it longer right?

Overall though I agree with Mizal, you might have bitten off more than you can chew. If written correctly however, I say it might be a great storygame.