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A Fun Little Poem for Halloween..

2 months ago

In the realms of spookiness,
Let's cheer,
For Halloween!
With bats as dark as the darkness, and creepy creatures gather together, if you're a human and a seer...

You might get quite a fright, with spooky skeletons arriving at people's doors,
And menacing witches brewing up a potion or two,
It's Halloween, the day we embrace-
The day where frightening sights comes, where black cats mew,

The rising of bad luck, comes out to you, gives you not a helping hand, but a spooky glare,
It turns and twists your day into a frightening nightmare,
Halloween is the time of ghouls and monsters rise,
And as you stare....

Be sure to watch out for a scary surprise,
Or you'll never know what'll happen.....BOO!

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Feel free to give me feedback on this short, little poem! 

A Fun Little Poem for Halloween..

2 months ago
Very whimsical.

But hey, as long as I'm here, we need to talk about this "Pet Stimulator" you're writing. Because I don't think that phrase means what you think it means.

A Fun Little Poem for Halloween..

2 months ago
Now that's nice. Now you can make another, hope it's still sweet.