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Falsely Accused:The Telenorian Kingdom's Worst Prison

Submitted for Sherbet's Summer's End Synergy Contest.

In this game, you play as a thief. The princess has been kidnapped and everyone suspected that the big fat evil dragon kidnapped her. Naturally, since you and your crew are the dragon's known associates, you are put in the jail. But here's the thing, you're innocent. From the moment you're in jail, it's been one nightmare after another. Far from administering the justice, the Telenorian Prison is nothing but exploitative and conniving. Will you be able to survive and point the finger back on those that did you wrong, or will you succumb to the darkness in jail without getting the chance to vindicate yourself. Warning: This game can be emotionally disturbing and contains dark themes with many parallels to real life. Proceed at your own risk.

Title Dreams

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You are a former amateur boxing champion who's now retired and in his late thirties. You used to be on top of the world, but these days you're unemployed at home, day-drinking and wondering where your life fell apart. One day your son comes home from school to ask you for a Title Belt because his friends didn't believe him when he said his father was a champion boxer. From that point on, your old demons resurface as you attempt to claw back some of your former glory. Can you dodge and weave your way to victory?

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look who's getting hints from their gay lover now(god I feel really immature typing all this out)

that was funny, that cracked me up! 😂

good job on the penguin story!

I had to get an assist: do you kiss your daddy with that mouth? 😎

Thanks Crimson, I'll use that!

Looks like I flew too close to the Sun, I have absolutely no idea how to respond to that

ignore her, she's cranky because she's eaten too many apples and she ingested the cyanide in the appleseeds

Did you mean to say excerpt or excrement?