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Sage

A Broken Reality

A Broken reality is from the perspective of a 12 year old girl who learns that everything she's ever known is a lie and reality isn't really real and she has to decide to live in the real world but lead a difficult life, or live in the simulation with no memory of anything else. This is my first story, so please give me advice in the comments. I'm sorry if I made english mistakes or if it isn't entertaining, I was in a foul mood when I made most of this. I want to be an author when I grow up, and this is made up from characters and settings and such from different books I wrote (that I'll probably never get to publish) that were put together in a way that it worked as one story.

A Broken Reality (rewritten)

unpublished

A Broken Reality (rewritten) is basically just a broken reality but changed drastically because I'm using the advice in the comments of A Broken Reality. Please, tell me if something's wrong with this one too, but instead of making another rewritten I'll probably just unpublish, rewrite, and republish it.

The horror doll

unpublished

You're in a lab, and your head seems foggy. You can't remember anything and can't seem to think straight. You have to get out and learn what the heck is happening. This is my 2nd story game, and probably worse than the first one. This was made the same way I made my first one, with put together bits and pieces of other stories I've already written. Sorry if some variables or something isn't working right, I'm still figuring out how to use everything.

I am 12

Is there a way I can share an unpublished story with someone for proofreading without showing them in person?

?!?!?! If I asked her a question like that, she'd probably ask if I was ok.

??? What's that mean?

K bye.

Same Google account, to specify.

Our parents. End of story.

Google hates us for it

we use the same account

Bloo?