Chris113022, The Expert Scrivener

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I'm Chris. Achievements: Vigilant Warrior (100) The Question Answered (170) First Knight (100)

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Earning 100 Points Earning 500 Points Earning 1,000 Points Earning 2,000 Points Has more than earned the right to carry this trophy. Chris has grown as a writer, as well as a positive and inspiring presence tremendously. He has not only improved himself, but leads as an example. Given by BerkaZerka on 03/27/2020 - For growing into CYS Given by EndMaster on 12/15/2019 - The Answer to The Question fanfics Given by madglee on 02/16/2022 - Evolution into a solid, hilarious writer and esteemed member Given by MadHattersDaughter on 03/11/2021 - You have really blossomed. Keep up the excellent writing.

Storygames

Dark Nights
NOTE: This story is one of my weakest. Feel free to give it a read if you want to, but don't expect anything too good, especially if you've read some of my other works. Gotham City was home to a myriad of vigilantes, and, in your personal opinion, the Huntress was the most interesting of them. So when you hear she's in trouble, of course you decide to give her a helping hand... Things escalate from there.

Dog Day

An unrepentant criminal tries to dodge his former associates after a weapons deal goes wrong. My entry for EndMaster's Edgelord Contest 2. I literally only wrote this to avoid SHAME so don't expect anything too great.


Dusty Fist

Can you get a good drink while fending off raiders?

A young martial artist visits a post-apocalyptic town in search of a drink. What happens next is up to you in this classic style CYOA inspired by the cult classic God Hand.

Special Thanks To:
Cricket - For beta reading.

Author's Notes: This is mostly just a little something I wrote for my own amusement and isn't meant to be taken seriously at all. It's written in the Time Cave format, which means that every choice leads you down a unique path instead of all that rebranching and stuff that modern interactive fiction tends to use.

With that said, leave all your common sense at the door, because it's about to get weird.


Dusty Fist 2: Electric Boogaloo

A young martial artist goes on another hilarious romp through post-apocalyptic America.

My entry for Mizal's 2019 Lone Hero Contest.

Authors Notes: This is a sequel to Dusty Fist. You don't actually need to have read the original in order to enjoy this one, as that was more of an elaborate shitpost while this... Is also an elaborate shitpost.


Hard Night

Just a regular night.

In this game, you play as the Question, Hub City's faceless protector. One night, what appears to be a normal drug bust goes south fast, and you find yourself with only two hours to live, an antidote to find, and a gang to topple.

Looks like it's just a normal night in Hub City.

First in the Questionable Tales series, a series of fanfiction games starring the Question. There's four endings not counting deaths: one bad, one bittersweet, one good, and one true ending. See if you can find them all.

The Question is copyright DC Comics. So yeah, don't sue me.

Author's Note: This game is really rough around the edges. I decided to give it a quick run through on October 4th, 2019 (over a year and a half after the original publication on February 2nd, 2018), in order to fix some minor bugs and add a "cheat code" for the infamously obtuse antidote puzzle. Hopefully, there are no more problems with the scripting and the like.

... And I ended up giving it another edit on October 8th, 2019 because I noticed another bug when replaying it. Not a major one, but still. I really didn't have my link restrictions in order at all.


Life In The Fast Lane
A getaway driver goes on a quest for revenge.

Silent Night

A very questionable Christmas special.

It's Christmas in Hub City. One might expect that even criminals would take the night off, but you've learned the hard way that crime doesn't sleep. While the rest of the city is tucked into their homes in the company of loved ones, you're on the hunt in a silent city, making sure that things stay that way.

The Question is copyright DC comics. So yeah, don't sue me.

Author's Notes: Did I say I was definitely not going to write a Question fanfiction for this contest? Because what I meant was I didn't mean to but I had to squeeze something out before the contest's end. And with Christmas so fast approaching, what better than a Christmas special, eh?


TechNOIR

Noir story in a cyberpunk dystopia. Four types of endings: deaths, bad endings, good endings, and one perfect ending. See if you can find them all, it shouldn't be too hard. Endings are tracked using the score variable: zero means death, one means bad, two means good, three means perfect.

Special thanks to:
Tim36D - For listening to me ramble on about the idea, making suggestions, and writing a few pages.
ISentinelPenguinI - For playtesting.

Finally, if you notice any bugs, please PM me and I'll get to work on them as soon as I can (though I do believe they've all been worked out, can never be too sure).

Mood music.


When The Music's Over
I hear a very gentle sound... Once you were the bravest hero in the land. Then, the greatest noble. Now, a washed up drunkard past his prime. But when the king asks for you to turn the tide of a war, will you accept, or cast his offer aside to walk your own path? Author's Notes: I originally intended for every single choice to branch out into a unique path, but to get this out I had to cut some of my plans short. There is minor rebranching here and there along with a few duplicate pages that have minor changes depending on how you reached those pages. On top of that, the path for accepting the king's offer is much more bare bones than I wanted it to be and is only about a third of the rest of the game's size (10k to the rest of the game's 30k). Someday, I hope to return to this story and make it the epic it deserves to be. For now, however, the game is finished. The SCORE variable doesn't indicate how good you did. It's just a way to keep track of what ending the reader got. If you play the game, please give a comment. I'd love to hear your thoughts. Special Thanks: Tim36D - For being my long-suffering best friend and listening to me ramble on about this story. Thanks man. Mizal - For constantly busting my ass to get this storygame done. Boom, now it is. Shadowdrake27 - For proofreading the story. Without him, there would be many typos and grammar errors. The CYS Discord - For being there to let me ramble on about my story on the occasions that Tim wasn't. The entire CYS community - For putting up with me for 5 years now. Stay classy, you omnidirectional vitriol spewers.

Bright Days
unpublished
The Question returns because some remain unanswered.

Dusty Fist 3: Bad Voodoo
unpublished
Dusty Fist but there's zombies in it too.

When The Music's Over: Redux
unpublished
Rise again. A complete remake of my magnum opus.

Recent Posts

that indian guy's odds mathematically. on 4/18/2025 8:11:38 PM
Mercer Gang!

that indian guy's odds mathematically. on 4/18/2025 6:58:44 PM
Common Sent W

Somewhat Damaged on 4/18/2025 5:52:17 PM
I've had this sitting in my archives for a few years now. Might as well post it. --- The Day The Whole World Went Away The rain slows, a torrent drifting away into a drizzle before ceasing altogether. Gradually, the trees recede around me as I step out into the field. I gaze around, then freeze in place at what I see: a soaked pile of rubble and charcoal. An icy claw digs its way into my stomach and rips everything open. I stumble forward into a sprint, blinking rapidly as I wrestle with reality. I try to make it right. I try to imagine that it's not real. There's a home here. There's a family here. There's a life here. There's my pops, out in the mushroom field, picking caps to help feed us. Mama's inside making supper, reheating last night's batch of mushroom soup, or what's left of it at least. She's shooing Remy away when he tries to get too close, but he's sticking his tongue out at her and clutching onto his toy boat. "We gotta find the secret treasure on Mushroom Island!" he says, and mama tries not to laugh at him. There's a home here and I left it. I left it to chase dreams of glory and what I got in return was steel. Unfeeling. Uncaring. Unloving. Pops said I'd be dead within the week, shot down by bandits or devoured by some beast. I think I would have preferred that. There was a girl here and I left her. A girl who smelled of fresh bread and had hair the color of the autumn leaves. My hands used to run through her hair, down to her shoulders, down to her sides, down to her hips. She didn't like it when I'd go further down. At least when we weren't behind closed doors. She's gone now. Same as pops. Same as mama. Same as Remy. I stumble and fall to my knees, sinking down into the ashes. My hands drop down to sift through the dirt but I can't feel anything. No sense of touch. My hands begin to dig through the soil, searching for anything that might have survived, any physical item I can latch onto. Something to give me hope. Something to help me deny the reality in front of me. All that's left are the ashes. No half burnt photograph. No scorched heirlooms. Not even a scrap of cloth or Remy's stupid boat. There was a home here. It's gone now.

Like A Butterfly on 4/18/2025 4:52:06 PM
... Maybe just one more today. My eyes shoot open at the sound of an engine revving up outside and headlights beaming in through the window, illuminating the room. Blearily, I sit up in bed and take a glance at the clock on the wall: 4:43 AM. I get out of bed and stumble over to the window, setting a hand on the windowsill to lean on, before setting my gaze outside. What I see is a black pickup truck parked a few yards away from the house, four men climbing out of it with guns in hand. Two have hunting rifles, one carries a double barrel shotgun, and the fourth carries a revolver. The one with the shotgun takes the lead, stopping a few feet away from the front porch and shouting, "WALTSON! COME ON OUT YOU OLD FAGGOT!" I tighten my grip on the windowsill at that. Something tells me they're not here for a nice early morning visit. I pull my clothes on as quickly as I can and throw myself through the bedroom door, nearly crashing right into George who's still in a pair of long johns. The old man steadies me with a pair of hands on my shoulders, then looks me in the eyes. His expression is stony and grim but I can see the fear behind his eyes. "Vic, go back to bed. I'll handle this," he says. I shake my head. "No. I'm going out there." He scowls at that. "I've dealt with these little fools before. They'll go running as soon as I head out there with my gun." "Have they brought guns before?" I ask. George freezes at that. "... No." "All four of them are packing heat. I don't think they're playing this time," I say, casting my gaze down the stairs before turning back to George. "Stay here. I can handle this." "Neither of us should go out there. Let's call the cops and stay inside, they won't try coming in." "You really think that? And you're so sure the cops will be able to make it in time? You live, what, an hour away from the nearest town? I don't think our friends," I gesture downstairs, "are inclined to sit outside waiting for us to come out for an hour. They'll break in eventually." George looks unsure at that. I shake his hands off me and start to walk downstairs. "Victor," he calls after me. I stop halfway down the stairs and glance over my shoulder at him and watch as his expression goes through a range of emotions before settling on resolution. He gives a grim nod and follows after me. We continue down the stairs, stopping at the front door where George grabs his shotgun while I stand ready to open the door. "I'll head out first. If you hear me shout, then you come out," I say, my grip on the doorknob tightening. He nods grimly. "... Don't get killed." I nod, then open the door and step out. The headlights nearly blind me. I raise a hand to shield my eyes, slowly lowering it as my eyes adjust to the brightness. I can see the four men more clearly: they look a bit younger than me, early 20s at most, all white with shaved heads, bulky builds and leather jackets. Skinheads, it seems like. These the "no good sons of a gun" that George talked about? The leader looks me over and laughs, looking over his shoulder at his buddies. "Ha, look, the old man's got a new boy toy," he says and they all chuckle. He turns back to me. "Was planning on just putting down one homo today but I guess two is a pleasant surprise." "You might want to reevaluate your expectations," I say, walking forward with a glare. He raises the shotgun and points it right at me. "Back off! I'll blow you away, motherfucker!" I continue my stride, stopping just an inch from the barrel leveled at my heart. "Will you?" The man within me is filled with rage, ready to bubble over and let it out in a violent explosion. Break their knees. Crack their skulls. Bust their noses. He has no fear of death, he's faced these odds before and every time he's come out on top. For once, the butterfly is in agreement with the man's assessment, but he holds no rage. These men have accumulated bad karma their whole lives and now the butterfly is ready to inflict it on them. Make them pay for their crimes. Right now, it feels less like a butterfly and more like a bee. I grab the shotgun by the barrel and divert its aim into the ground. He fires, the shot blowing apart the turf, and I swing an open palm into his nose once, twice, three times. His grip on the gun goes loose and I pry it from his hands, swinging the stock of the gun into his head and knocking him out cold where he stands. The man hasn't even hit the ground before I swiftly jump over him and send the shotgun flying at one of the riflemen, the weapon nailing him in the face and sending him to the ground. I pivot into a side kick aimed at the second rifleman's chin, snapping his head back and giving me an opportunity to grapple him and throw him at the only man still standing, the one with the revolver who's taking aim at me. A shot fires from the revolver, the bullet whizzing right past my head, but he doesn't get a chance to fire again as his friend crashes into him. They both groan in a heap as they attempt to untangle themselves and stand. The first rifleman is standing again, his nose twisted and bloodied. He snarls at me, baring his chipped and bloody teeth, while raising his rifle. I crouch down and dart forward, zigging and zagging so he can't maintain a bead on me. The gun goes off anyways, a bullet clipping my shoulder, but the adrenaline flowing through me keeps me from feeling it. I spring forward and upward the last few feet, sending an uppercut into his throat. He gets sent stumbling back and onto his ass, gasping for a breath. A quick stomp on his face and he goes silent. I twist back around. The gunslinger and the other rifleman are standing now, rifleman missing his gun but gunslinger with revolver in hand. I pick up the rifle at my feet and quickly set my sights on the gunslinger, firing; the shot tears through his calf and he falls to the ground, screaming in pain. I twist the gun in my hand around to use it as a club as I sprint at the final man, who stands with readied fists and terrified eyes. Once close, I swing, and he brings up his forearms to block the hit. The force of the impact staggers him but he remains standing, so I duck into a sweeping kick and knock him onto the ground. One hand holds him down by the shoulder while the other brings the butt of the rifle down onto his face. And then I do it again. And again. And again. And again. And again. Again. Again. Again. Aga- I toss the rifle away, forcing myself to stop. His features are distorted, twisted in ways they shouldn't be. Nose folded against left cheek, eyes swollen shut, lips split open, gashes and welts all over the rest of the face. His fair skin isn't even recognizable as skin anymore, more just one giant black and blue bruise. He gurgles up a glob of blood and broken teeth as he tries to breathe. I turn him onto his side and a spew of vomit, saliva and blood spills out of his mouth. Then he can breathe again. I stand up, my whole body shuddering as I take in deep breaths. The man's bloodlust is crying out for more, more, but the butterfly must contain him, tell him that they have gone far enough. This has been enough to ensure the man will never hurt anyone again. There's no need to kill him. No need to kill him. No need to kill. No need... Need... "Victor?" I snap back around to see George standing there, shotgun in hand. He examines the scene on his front lawn with wide eyes, taking in the carnage I had dealt onto these men. Blood has splattered onto the grass which still blows softly in the breeze, unaffected by the battle that had just occurred. George brings his eyes to mine and I can see the fear in them. "How the hell did you..." his voice trails off but I already know the question he's asking. I don't answer. Instead, I start walking towards the truck. I open the driver's door, about to get in when- "Victor!" A hand on my shoulder. I twist around, snarling, seeing George's worried face quickly morph into shock. The man is in control right now with all his feral, violent tendencies. He holds no love for anything, no care, no tenderness. All he knows, all he is, is pain. But the butterfly is greater than him, and it exerts its power over him, sending him away for the time to take over with its bliss. I let the tension leave my shoulders and give a sigh. I look at George with a soft gaze. "... I'm sorry. I can't stay any longer. Have to go before the cops get here." "Why?" "I need to get to Hub City as soon as possible. I'm needed there. I can't spend all day talking to the cops and then keep making court appearances for the next few months." I turn back around and climb into the truck. "Victor." I turn to him. George looks at me with a conflicted expression. Fear. Concern. Apprehension. Finally, his expression morphs into a smile, not too sure of itself but standing on that uneasy ground confidently anyways. "... Godspeed. And take care," he says. I give him the slightest upturn of my lips and a nod, before I close the door and take hold of the steering wheel. George backs up as I back out of his yard and onto the dirt road, heading back through the way I entered this serene little field he calls a home. I gaze into the rearview mirror and see George standing, watching me. I can't make out his expression from this far away. Can't imagine what it could be either. I set my eyes back onto the road, intent on reaching Hub City.

Like A Butterfly on 4/18/2025 4:45:43 PM
Once again, the feedback is much appreciated my man! I'll probably hold off on posting more because I don't want to flood the thread with text walls. Part of me wants to get back into writing these again, I had a pretty good run going but stopped writing it after hitting a depressive episode last year.

Ignacia de Loyola on 4/18/2025 3:31:20 PM
bumping this thread because fuck it I'mma be real dog, when I made this thread I was just trying to brute force my way through the story by clicking random links until I got an end game link.

that indian guy's odds mathematically. on 4/18/2025 2:51:05 PM

that indian guy's odds mathematically. on 4/18/2025 2:30:16 PM
A brony's soul for mine is such an uneven trade, I'm worth at least twenty of that bastard.

Like A Butterfly on 4/18/2025 1:05:02 PM
Yeah there's a lot of stories ripe for telling during that time in Rorschach's career. There was a Watchmen game that came out around the time of the movie that covered that era, but iirc it kinda sucked lol.

Like A Butterfly on 4/18/2025 1:00:28 PM
Oh, forgot to say, a Rorschach fan fiction would go so hard. I'd read the hell out of that.