One of the biggest birthdays then. Hope it becomes a memorable one for you. 

Happy early birthday as well. How old are you going to be? 

Gave your story a read and a review. Good effort! Hope you at least find my review either entertaining or constructive : )

It's good! I think I found the blue one being my favourite. It overall seemed to flow the best. I think there's a few lines that could be a bit smoother ( but I'm on my phone so copy and pasting is a pain so I can't be assed showing you which). 

Probably eternal or ground zero for me. Necromancer was the first story game I read on the site. Really loved it, I found him the most relate able out of end masters protagonists, since most of the time they seem kinda "cold" In personality and speech, etc. Very calculating and unemotional almost.  Not necessarily a bad thing, it fits who they are and what endmaster goes for with them, especially in eternal. 

I'll give both this and anthraxs story a read tomorrow! 

Disgusting. Can't believe you haven't read rogues. A potential spoiler (depending on the route you take) its one of the only brother x sis stories I can route for. 

Which is your favourite CYS story?

The hardest bit about this job is not eating your own product and getting fired lol

I've actually read death song! I don't really remember much about it except that the protagonist is a bard and there's really not as much fighting compared to the others. I plan on going back to all end master stories to give them proper reviews. I also remember death song having a more depressing of melancholy ending. 

I don't know how I'd rank the end master stories I've read. I know I rated rogues an 8 and eternal a 7 , and in retrospect I really don't know why I did that lol, since I remember much more about eternal and the plot than I do rogues. Based on how I rate story games now, id give necromancer, eternal and rogues all 8s. But I'll have to to back and read them all.