An Honourable Gentleman?

I am such a social climber! This story is very similar to the previous one but entirely serious and you've caught the hang of the tone, speech and manners of the time quite well. It could have been spiced up with a few duels, affairs, extravagant beard growing and the like but within it's limits it was a fine little story :) It'd be interesting to see this developed,
Something along the lines of "Oh Joy I have a husband but alas, he had his head removed by a cannonball at Waterloo which was rather inconvenient and since then his manners have suffered deplorably with his Lordship showing very little interest in conversation or his usual interests. One feels one has absolutely no choice but to go walking in the park with his cousin and take in the sights, regardless of the scandal and dishonour such frivolous behaviour will undoubtably bring on one's fair and upturned hair etc." :D

I became countess! Well, this was a well-written game and the narrative was something that I rather enjoyed.

So I must say, bravo! :D My only complaint was that it was a bit short, but it wasn't bad by any means.

It's uh weird

Pretty fun!! Good at setting the scene and characters, matches the tone and overall mood of the story through language well. I quite enjoyed it!!

Love this!!

Lmfao YES I DIE AN OLD MAID MY DREAM COME TRUE

Had a promising start, but lacks conflict and obstacles to really grab the reader and make them want to root for either couple. The personalities of all the characters haven't really been developed enough for the reader to form an attachment, which is critical when creating a good story. You want the reader to identify with the characters in some way so they are more invested in the outcome of their story. Also, from the little shown about the characters they are a bit sterotypical. They seem a bit too perfect and lack flaws. Wouldn't the cousin seek some way to ruin the main female character's reputation so she can have the main male character all to herself?

good idea but kinda blah, wish it was longer/more interesting

Immaculate.

Expected a little more, way to easy... Made 3 or 4 coiches and ended up with the perfect love story without even trying.